I liked the hook on this, but I felt like this could've done from something more extravagant, too.
Liked the concept and you always have a really good flow and great delievery.
I do feel as if you could've done something really great on this if you would've thought outside of the box, you know? there was great storytelling potential here, but I don't think you were looking to go that route, anyways. Stellar lines throughout, but I felt as if that "head on the wall..." line in the first verse was kinda of a throwaway, "let me think of something to put here real quick" line. Idk if it's just your delivery or what, but almost all of your songs have a real old school, west coast feel to it, but I like it.
"But I'm gettin' to this point where they hate you; they want a nigga dead for the truth they give you."
Overall - 4/5
Liked the concept and you always have a really good flow and great delievery.
I do feel as if you could've done something really great on this if you would've thought outside of the box, you know? there was great storytelling potential here, but I don't think you were looking to go that route, anyways. Stellar lines throughout, but I felt as if that "head on the wall..." line in the first verse was kinda of a throwaway, "let me think of something to put here real quick" line. Idk if it's just your delivery or what, but almost all of your songs have a real old school, west coast feel to it, but I like it.
"But I'm gettin' to this point where they hate you; they want a nigga dead for the truth they give you."
Overall - 4/5
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