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    LoKo - She's Mine

    This track was recorded with my older mic so the quality isn't as good as it usually is. So don't mind the oversaturation of EQ on the chorus. Just tried something a little different since it's not the typical song I'd rap. Shoutout to my niggas in long distance relationships. Niggas saying I need substance and only rap about "typical nigga shit" and "only do punchlines". So yeah. Fuk Yall.








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    fukk the haters on here man you went in deep on this. You told a story with ya lyrics its and its different. Fr my nikka we need to collab str8 up!

    Flow: 4/5
    lyrics:5/5
    overall:5/5
    Last edited by tmillzy; 02-27-2013, 03:33 AM.
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    • #3
      Originally posted by tmillzy View Post
      fukk the haters on here man you went in deep on this. You told a story with ya lyrics its and its different. Fr my nikka we need to collab str8 up!

      Flow: 4/5
      lyrics:5/5
      overall:5/5
      good lookin out my dude. niggas sleeping on this track because they probably see my name and assume they already know what ima be rapping about lol. glad u actually took the time out to listen . and yea we def need to.

      What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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      • #4
        This track is dope dude. Been waiting on some substance from you lol. Just fucking around me, you're a dope lyricist. Some time it's hard to jump across the genres of hip-hop but you did this effortlessly my dude. The different sound with the mic is cool, it gives a whole other vibe in comparison to your usual stuff. Sets the stage for you to bring some versatility. A1 track bro.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
          good lookin out my dude. niggas sleeping on this track because they probably see my name and assume they already know what ima be rapping about lol. glad u actually took the time out to listen . and yea we def need to.
          matter fact i got a hook i need you on whats ya email
          I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
          FERINA OMO or Die

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          • #6
            I really like this track! Your flow is dope af and your lyrics are meaningful and real
            I like your other songs too but this one is my favorite so far tbh

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            • #7
              That rhyme scheme at the beginning of the first verse, ah.

              Nice to hear you switch up. You got the punchline shit perfected, so it's good to hear you branch out. This was pretty dope. The mixing is kinda grating and makes you sound kinda feminine for some reason, like your voice sounds pretty light idk why. kinda sounds a lil' like chance the rapper. I can't even fault the lyrics. you never slack with that. If your mixtape has nice variety, it will definitely be a banger. I would change the lil' I love you thing at the end of last verse. wasn't really fucking it. sounded like you just needed something to end the verse with and was like fuck it.

              4/5 (The mixing is the worst part)


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              • #8
                Why do you keep kickin' up the treble and lowering the bass in your songs? Makes em sound weird... It's like, some guys on here are great rappers with skills, but their recording and mixing holds em back. Your mixing isnt bad by any means (the hook is mixed very well), its just you take most of the bass outta ya voice and turn up the treble. Doesnt sound like something you'd hear on the radio.

                There's a lotta multies on here. It's a Loko song, so that's a definite. Concept was executed very well. Vocals sound a little louder than they should be, but meh. That could just be my speakers. Song kinda ends abruptly though...

                Overall: 4/5

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by IN10SION View Post
                  I really like this track! Your flow is dope af and your lyrics are meaningful and real
                  I like your other songs too but this one is my favorite so far tbh
                  Thanks brodie. Wasn't really sure how people would react to this track since it's different from my norm but i'm glad everyone's positive about it.

                  Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
                  That rhyme scheme at the beginning of the first verse, ah.

                  Nice to hear you switch up. You got the punchline shit perfected, so it's good to hear you branch out. This was pretty dope. The mixing is kinda grating and makes you sound kinda feminine for some reason, like your voice sounds pretty light idk why. kinda sounds a lil' like chance the rapper. I can't even fault the lyrics. you never slack with that. If your mixtape has nice variety, it will definitely be a banger. I would change the lil' I love you thing at the end of last verse. wasn't really fucking it. sounded like you just needed something to end the verse with and was like fuck it.

                  4/5 (The mixing is the worst part)
                  Yeah it's easy to tell that the entire third verse was written separately from the first two. Got kinda lazy towards the end of writing it, but then again I think it'd have been boring if I kept the same scheme from the first two verses. The "I Love You" part is kinda forced and cheesy, but I think here it low to midkey works. Glad you fucking with it though. Gotta branch out every now and then.

                  Originally posted by mykill View Post
                  Why do you keep kickin' up the treble and lowering the bass in your songs? Makes em sound weird... It's like, some guys on here are great rappers with skills, but their recording and mixing holds em back. Your mixing isnt bad by any means (the hook is mixed very well), its just you take most of the bass outta ya voice and turn up the treble. Doesnt sound like something you'd hear on the radio.

                  There's a lotta multies on here. It's a Loko song, so that's a definite. Concept was executed very well. Vocals sound a little louder than they should be, but meh. That could just be my speakers. Song kinda ends abruptly though...

                  Overall: 4/5
                  Idk man lol I'm obsessed with treble. It highlights my voice more and when I put the bass in it sounds flat and boring and unmixed. Personal preference I guess, but then again I'm not that great an engineer to start with so I manage with what I can do ykno. And regarding why the song ends abruptly: there was a whole sappy monologue at the end but i took it out because the girl I was with at the time of recording this, isn't the same girl I'm with now. Lol. So to avoid any drama or misunderstandings, I just cut it out.

                  What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
                    And regarding why the song ends abruptly: there was a whole sappy monologue at the end but i took it out because the girl I was with at the time of recording this, isn't the same girl I'm with now. Lol. So to avoid any drama or misunderstandings, I just cut it out.
                    lolz!

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                    • #11
                      I Like This Song It's Pretty Dope, But From Scale From 1 To 5 I Give It A 4, Keep Up The Good Work.

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
                        Idk man lol I'm obsessed with treble. It highlights my voice more and when I put the bass in it sounds flat and boring and unmixed. Personal preference I guess, but then again I'm not that great an engineer to start with so I manage with what I can do ykno. And regarding why the song ends abruptly: there was a whole sappy monologue at the end but i took it out because the girl I was with at the time of recording this, isn't the same girl I'm with now. Lol. So to avoid any drama or misunderstandings, I just cut it out.
                        RNS lol

                        Back to the song, the intro LOL I cudnt help but laugh. Lyrically u killed this shit prolly One of the best lyricist ive heard on here.

                        Give the song 4/5 If u left out that intro i wudve rated it 5/5 lol
                        Last edited by yungfamou5; 03-07-2013, 02:09 AM.
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