Young Ben - Started From The Bottom (Freestyle)

[Lucifer]

hey young ben what happens when you get older will you change your name?

[youngben]

Need work on better delivery and flow.

I don't feel what your saying whatsoever.

Your confidence is up there already tho.

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Alright, thanks for the feedback.

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this tbh.

but it wasn't really bad the only thing that really botherd me was the qualtiy..

it's like the acaapella was waaay to loud

but it's hard work we all know that lol

Yea i forgot to change the gain on my mic when i recorded.

Thanks for the feedback.

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You was spitting some real in the beginning but you started losing me as the song was ending.. Nice freestyle tho keep up the work

Thanks bro, appreciate it.

[Flame Beats]

average flow, decent lyrics, vocals are loud. 3.5/5

[__cas__]

Put a limiter on those vocals man lol

[mykill]

The deadspace is lame. You need to fill that with talking or something. I thought it was just an instrumental until you finally said something. Your flow is pretty decent. You might need to put more feeling in your lines, but there's a lot of monotone rappers (Drake for instance) that do well so you don't really have to change any of that. The part where you ask yourself "Are you ready man?" is kinda lame. You should be directing it to your listeners - "Are ya'll ready?!" or something like that. Lyrically this is ok. Nothing that will turn any heads, but still good for a freestyle. Keep it up man, thanks for posting.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

[KevLar Da Don]

This is ok. I feel like you could have done better. And the quality done better too.

[youngben]

Thanks for the replies guys, appreciate it.

Will keep the comments in mind when i record again

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

not bad bro, you got potential it kinda got boring towards the end, like switch up the flow a little, 3/5 doe

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not bad bro, you got potential it kinda got boring towards the end, like switch up the flow a little, 3/5 doe