Lil' Jay Official Thread! (New Songs, Mixtapes, News, etc.)

[IAmJay]

Well I'm making my own thread, skimduddee420 gave me the idea so I had to make it.
Here I will be posting my own songs (Collabs) too. But to start it off, I just finished this song called "Real Love"
GIVE FEEDBACK!

UserShare:http://usershare.net/7b36ekxlkirq

LimeLinx (incase): http://limelinx.com/files/6459f00ab0...351d7dd5d5cc74

Give feedback please, didn't write this song just sang it through my mind.

[YoungFire420]

Re: Lil' Jay - Real Love

If you dont change this thread to an official "Lil Jay" thread where you post all your songs. The mods will give you a warning.

[Redd Herring]

Re: Lil' Jay - Real Love

Im not gonna lie to you n say that was the greatest but i can defintely say it wasnt the worst. Everything was really good except for the autotune or whatever effect you had on your vocalz... flow could use some practice maybe really depends on what you were goin for so i cant really comment on that and be cannon or on point with it ya know? but shit i still liked the song man keep rockin that mic

If you dont change this thread to an official "Lil Jay" thread where you post all your songs. The mods will give you a warning.

That is also true as we are trying to lose the spam in here so it makes puttin our tracks up easier and makes it easier for the admins like danny to not have to clean so many messes up. im sure if he wanted a janitor he would bring back trill or ynr seeing as they both are scum. but yeah do that n your all good to go

[IAmJay]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

Thanks.

[YoungFire420]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

Thanks for changing the name! But ehhhhh, man. You gotta lay off the autotune.

[IAmJay]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

I will brah....

[Artille]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

I actually liked the autotune on this one. He did his thing on this track as well. Just try putting more emphasis on the end of your bars, it will make it sound better. Basically stretch your voice a little bit more, beings that it was a love song and you were singing. All in all it was pretty good, even though I'm not into love songs. I don't know if it was just me either, but you should also speak a little bit louder, because at times it seemed a little too soft.

7/10

[YoungFire420]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

I will brah....

Good, cause i know you can rap. And autotune on alot of tracks isnt good. You gotta show raw talent just rippin up a track with lyrics too.

[IAmJay]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

Ok I'm releasing a new one in alil without Autotune.

[IAmJay]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

I Be Urpy - http://limelinx.com/files/2d47309923...17dd57294017b1

Feedback!

[Redd Herring]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

I Be Urpy - http://limelinx.com/files/2d47309923...17dd57294017b1

Feedback!

what ever you did in the begining kinda creeped me out than reminded me of weezy's lil laugh in a cpl song

Hook- IM lovin that shit right there man

verse 1- try turning the volume up on the vocals i i hear what your saying but i cant verify anything

verse2 - i'd suggest maybe pulling away from your mic some or take the boost down on it as its a lil distorted

if you edit that shit right yo it'll be a top end track of the HQ IMO

[IAmJay]

Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

Damn well thanks I'll see what I do.