E-LOW | Step In My Realm #RHYTHMICINTELLIGENCE

[elow252]

Something I recorded messing around with this murderous beat by VARSITY BEATS. Let me know what y'all think about it. It's on my mixtape, (r)ED (more info on my soundcloud), which will be fully released on May 15.




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[Megaman]

Dude the mix on this isn't really good.. or the mic isn't great.. anyways the sound quality could be better.

But besides that I like your flow on this especially at the beginning

[elow252]

[MENTION=70890]Megaman[/MENTION] thanks for the feedback and checkin this out man. Do you mind me askin what sounds off about the mix?

[Megaman]

[MENTION=70890]Megaman[/MENTION] thanks for the feedback and checkin this out man. Do you mind me askin what sounds off about the mix?

I'm not sure but I think the voice is too loud and/ or the compression should be better. Did you eq your voice?

[mykill]

I dont think the mixing is horrible... I just feel like you need to get better mic presence. Sometimes you sound like you're afraid of the mic. You need more energy in your delivery. Flow seems good, just work on that mic presence some. For instance, start listening to like Eminem. Look at how his vocal delivery changes back and forth throughout his verse. That's the variety you need in your deliver i think.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[elow252]

I dont think the mixing is horrible... I just feel like you need to get better mic presence. Sometimes you sound like you're afraid of the mic. You need more energy in your delivery. Flow seems good, just work on that mic presence some. For instance, start listening to like Eminem. Look at how his vocal delivery changes back and forth throughout his verse. That's the variety you need in your deliver i think.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

Thanks for the feedback man, thats definitely something i know I need to work on. I'll keep what you said in mind and keep improving!

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I'm not sure but I think the voice is too loud and/ or the compression should be better. Did you eq your voice?

I just re-uploaded a better mixed version, let me know how it's sounding now.

[KidComet]

I like the flow, the delivery need some work and all and the quality needs to be beefed up some,

[elow252]

Thanks for listening bro !

[Laudacity93]

It's a cool song bro just needs a lil work mixing wise. the flow was a bit choppy at times but keep at it man. 3/5

[elow252]

It's a cool song bro just needs a lil work mixing wise. the flow was a bit choppy at times but keep at it man. 3/5

Good looks man I will !

[Flame Beats]

nice flow and lyrics. yeah you delivery is a little weak but beside that, good song. 4/5

[elow252]

nice flow and lyrics. yeah you delivery is a little weak but beside that, good song. 4/5

Thanks fam, always putting in work to improve too! 👌