Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

[MoneyIsEverything]

Re: Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

Well I'd love to read his perfection. Please do, Patriarch, no hate.

P.S. YungNRuthless... awesome verse.

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

Well I'd love to read his perfection. Please do, Patriarch, no hate.

P.S. YungNRuthless... awesome verse.

thank u sir.

[YungNRuthless]

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Fredd thanks

[Patriarch]

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Now sit back man and open your ears
As I take you on back through the past 50 years
American fears breedin American tears
breedin all the shit we have in America here
I'm steerin you down a path I take you through
To show you shit that I'd like to think that you knew
So hold on as I take you down into
A story that begins with us in 1952
Exit Truman and enter Ike
Man fresh back from stompin out the third reich
Meanwhile, eight thousand miles away
Iran had elected Mohammed Mossadegh
Who, sick of the English on Iranian soil
Seized the company Anglo-Iranian Oil
But he underestimated Anglo-imperialism
Cuz MI6 went to Ike and begged him to listen
See, they tried this shit already on Harry Truman
But Harry said the US just wouldn't be screwin
Some country without something there worth pursuing
So this time they warned him of the Soviet Union
Warning Ike of USSR hegemony
and how Iran couldn't simply be left to be
Chewed up, spit out, stripped of her crude
And how America simply must interlude
How the states gotta bring aid, water and food
Or failing that gotta invade or start a coup
Our president naturally went with the second plan
They would be startin a coup d'etat in Iran
The man chosen for the job bore a familiar name
He was Kermit Roosevelt and CIA trained
The grandson of our beloved former president
Sent overseas to "inform" their residents
The President sent him to upset present prescidence
Operation Ajax done without hesitence
First get the people riled up and scared
All the while low profile you weren't there
Fund mobs, crush jobs, cover walls with grafitti
All so you can bring back Fazlollah Zahedi
New puppet in office declares marshal law
Get him to condemn Mossadegh and install the Shah
So we took another step in the shoes of hypocrisy
Preaching freedom while undermining their democracy

Come one, come all, and gather around
You can talk all you like; just don't make a sound
Welcome to the show, please wait to be seated
Orders comin from the wealthy and conceited
Sufferin don't matter, when our people don't mind
And suffrage don't matter when our people are blind
Read a book nigga, and open your eyes
And realize there's more to life than cash, cars and ice

Twenty six years of the Shah living lavishly
In a palace, walls covered in silk tapestries
But his personal excess gave the country a jolt
And his compliance with the West made the country revolt
The year, my friends, was 1979
And what happened there was what happens every time
You have a country under the rule of a dictator
Starve the people, leave their only faith in the creator
They rose up and with a holy decree
Gave their country up to Ayatollah Khomeini
And the teachings of Islamic fundamentalism
Which at the start did not shun pacifism
But their religion spread too quickly and moved into Iraq
Prompting Saddam to launch a preemptive attack
Starting the mothafuckin Iraq-Iran War
Over a million dead, but just wait there's more
You may think the US had Iran's back
But instead the US backed the tyrant in Iraq
Sendin him weapons and WMDs
Which, you may recall, we've been searching for recently
The war ended, but Saddam wasn't done
You see, his country was now awash in American guns
And with a rumored ok from the United States
In 1990, Saddam invaded Kuwait

Come one, come all, and gather around
You can talk all you like; just don't make a sound
Welcome to the show, please wait to be seated
Orders comin from the wealthy and conceited
Sufferin don't matter, when our people don't mind
And suffrage don't matter when our people are blind
Read a book nigga, and open your eyes
And realize there's more to life than cash, cars and ice

So Bin Laden of the Mujahadeen offered his aid
As he had done to the Afghans in 1978
Through 1988, shootin down Rusky jets
He was fightin the original threat - the Soviets
BUT this time he was turned down
Meaning America set up on their holy ground
Military shit right next to Meccha and Medina
Demons cleanin up the holy ground, laughin like hyenas
So it's really no wonder that on September 11th
Over 3000 people were sent straight to heaven
But what's embarrassing and what gets the kicks
Is we were warned of this shit in 1996
In Bin Laden's fatwa, or in 1998
When Bin Laden declared war on the United States
Or the '93 WTC bombed basement
And our government's incompetence tryin to trace it
Dick Cheney's a mass murderer but he gets to walk
Even though he convinced Bush to go back to Iraq
That warhawk believes the outcome will be different
Despite half a century of evidence to contradict
So go ahead and keep suckin the President's dick
Go ahead and keep fallin for the governments tricks
So go ahead and listen to all that they spit
But if you from where I'm from we call that shit

[YungNRuthless]

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Patriarch damn man i was expecting that, dope, it was like a novel

[djsteezybeatz]

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that was like some shit you hear in history class patriarch. damn nigguh

[Lil' Chamillitary]

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Damn Patriarch I knew u were smart and sick but this shit is just a history killa!

[YoungMoneyEnt]

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I remember when i had nothing for dinner..
no air in the summer, no heat in the winter..
pops was doing coke, so the family was broke..
i know i had to swallow it but i was afraid id choke..
i couldn't pary to god, cause i didn't believe in em..
my mom seen us struggling so she ended up leaving him..
we went back to my homestate, to try to escape..
my mom took em back, boy was that a mistake..
he treated us worse, beat me, i was 12 ofcouse...
i could't hit back, so the family felt trapped..
understand? where im coming from man?
i didnt want it, but i kept it cool as a fan...
so my mom left him again, she got herself a boyfriend,
now this is where i am, i left school, cause of bullys
hung with bad people who carried fullys...
after that my life hasn't been the same,
im depressed, all i really want is a bullet to the brain,
i feel like im on a train, they left me insane,
because its never stop-ing..
then it started to slow down when i met her,
she is beautiful, she can save me im sure,

please, stop that. he went hard here

co sign.. he did go ridiculous on that
I will give it a shot later but i gotta get off soon to finish something

[YungNRuthless]

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thanks YoungMoneyEnt

[trillphill]

Re: Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

aight here's my drop.

"Silenced" (conspiracy)


im finally home as i sit and write this to you listenin.
even propaganda can't hide them breakin the constitution.
not even the propaganda can silence our witnessin.
as we stood by having blatant lies beatin into our minds,
who wants to be a citizen to a country of this?
i guess my parents believed in a system once so bliss.
but where was justice when they put the red dot on her,shot her,
and taking a homeless guy to blame with manslaughter.
his name was Richard, a poor father who had a daughter,
taken away to state quarters like someone had bought her,
the man could barely stand to walk like walls with no mortar.
the judge's proceeding hand cut his heart like country border's.
did all this shit happen because of what me and eddy did?
this is gettin to my head like kurt cobain's weapon.
someone help, i need to find a reverend,
cus i'm thinkin about my next stop to heaven.

(chorus)

the government is bullshit,
tryna kill us citizens with full clips.
but we don't have to stay silent forever,
come brothers, let us band together.
or eternally hold your peace,
yea that's bullshit they speak.
and after they come and get me,
this song will repeat in their dreams.


i decided to visit my reverend
before i put the gun to my head screamin 187.
Mark was his name, a good friend.
but to me he's just brethren.
i've known this guy my whole life,
i could trust him with my kids and wife.
we discussed all the stuff in the paper and daily news spill.
"What the fuck is this now, we're allies with Kim Jong-il?!"
soon we're all gonna be like them, blind.
havin our intellect torn from our mind like apartheid.
god might as well be just another blind man,
cus he mustn't be able to see us nightly cryin.
or he would run right to our side,
embracing us with his evangelic site.
if i would cry he would cry.
if i would die he'd be my after life.

(chorus)

the government is bullshit,
tryna kill us citizens with full clips.
but we don't have to stay silent forever,
come brothers, let us band together.
or eternally hold your peace,
yea that's bullshit they speak.
and after they come and get me,
this song will repeat in their dreams.


the government is bullshit,
ima have to kill em with full clips.
cus this song has only left a dent
in these foolish bastard's incompetence.
but before i let my 4 5 speak,
i ask for you to forgive me.
as i unleash a hungry army,
to burn these demons like dry barley.
we will fight for life and liberty as human beings,
bring uprisings equivalent to the distance of god's angels falling.
that was my tyranny-to-freedom life lesson.
so i give praise to a non spite-less son.
because his name wasn't fore-mentioned.
he believed in tranquility
that came through unity as one.
that man's name is Thomas Jefferson.
the government has taken new chances,
but can't kill me with their death sentence.
they have to face men that don't believe in evanescence,
cus i'll stand adjacent to god forever in their presence.

**i took out one word, at the end of my 2nd verse i pulled out "in", which was after "be", just don't want to seem like im unfairly changing my post

[Patriarch]

Re: Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

I am setting the deadline for noon pacific time on Tuesday. Since nobody's said anything, I'm assuming you guys want me to just pick.

[Lil' Chamillitary]

Re: Patriarch's Raptastic, Raptacular Rap Contest

I am setting the deadline for noon pacific time on Tuesday. Since nobody's said anything, I'm assuming you guys want me to just pick.

Oh never mind I just read your first post and got it !