Off the Dome-Contest

[Artille]

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Twist yours was straight

This ones real...


Yeah, I met a girl so fine
I got her number and I picked her up at nine
After the movie, you know we had to dine
What did I eat? hot pussy, cold wine
Then I take her outside and we look up at the moon
I tell her sexy ass I will take her there soon
She say I'm so animated, but I'm not a cartoon
If she don't let me hit, I'll throw her off them docks like boon
I gave your girl my number, and I knew that she would call
But I didn't know that she would make me throw my phone against the wall
That bitch better stop blowin up my phone
If she don't Ima make that girl moan
I ain't talkin sex, I'ma slit her throat
I bet when you started reading this, you thought it was a love note.

[Artille]

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Narh it was actually really good maybe you would have liked it if it didnt say. "Skim before you even start, you need to retire"

No not at all. That kid cant diss me with shit like that. I wouldnt even consider that a diss. Go read my other freestyles, and you'll see some good flow and lyrics.

I know this is from a few pages back, but how do you not consider that a dis? I used your name and everything, I even said "FUCK STEEZY AND YOUNG FIRE!!!". That is about as direct as I can make it. I used your name several times actually.

[YoungFire420]

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Narh it was actually really good maybe you would have liked it if it didnt say. "Skim before you even start, you need to retire"

No not at all. That kid cant diss me with shit like that. I wouldnt even consider that a diss. Go read my other freestyles, and you'll see some good flow and lyrics.

I know this is from a few pages back, but how do you not consider that a dis? I used your name and everything, I even said "FUCK STEEZY AND YOUNG FIRE!!!". That is about as direct as I can make it. I used your name several times actually.

I dont consider it a diss, cause it was weak as shit. You got a few new friends on the site and you think you're cool as fuck all of a sudden. Trying to write raps, which are below average.

[Artille]

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Narh it was actually really good maybe you would have liked it if it didnt say. "Skim before you even start, you need to retire"

No not at all. That kid cant diss me with shit like that. I wouldnt even consider that a diss. Go read my other freestyles, and you'll see some good flow and lyrics.

I know this is from a few pages back, but how do you not consider that a dis? I used your name and everything, I even said "FUCK STEEZY AND YOUNG FIRE!!!". That is about as direct as I can make it. I used your name several times actually.

I dont consider it a diss, cause it was weak as shit. You got a few new friends on the site and you think you're cool as fuck all of a sudden. Trying to write raps, which are below average.

My written "amateur" raps are better than your recorded raps. I'm not gonna say I go hard every time I write, but god damn give me some credit. How were they weak as fuck? That's what a pussy says when he doesn't want to respond. Why are you the only one that thinks it was weak?

[YoungFire420]

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Narh it was actually really good maybe you would have liked it if it didnt say. "Skim before you even start, you need to retire"

No not at all. That kid cant diss me with shit like that. I wouldnt even consider that a diss. Go read my other freestyles, and you'll see some good flow and lyrics.

I know this is from a few pages back, but how do you not consider that a dis? I used your name and everything, I even said "FUCK STEEZY AND YOUNG FIRE!!!". That is about as direct as I can make it. I used your name several times actually.

I dont consider it a diss, cause it was weak as shit. You got a few new friends on the site and you think you're cool as fuck all of a sudden. Trying to write raps, which are below average.

My written "amateur" raps are better than your recorded raps. I'm not gonna say I go hard every time I write, but god damn give me some credit. How were they weak as fuck? That's what a pussy says when he doesn't want to respond. Why are you the only one that thinks it was weak?

You say that, but just a couple weeks ago you were all over my music's dick. And promoting my songs like a bitch. Good one.

And you're rhymes are just so amateur. "Fine, wine, dine, nine". And you dont have punchlines. Flow is good. But flow aint nothing.

And i didnt respond, because ive been recording/mixing/mastering songs like the past 2 days. No time for bitches like yourself. Get at me when you put out a track hater.

[Artille]

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[quote=skimdudee420]

Narh it was actually really good maybe you would have liked it if it didnt say. "Skim before you even start, you need to retire"

No not at all. That kid cant diss me with shit like that. I wouldnt even consider that a diss. Go read my other freestyles, and you'll see some good flow and lyrics.

I know this is from a few pages back, but how do you not consider that a dis? I used your name and everything, I even said "FUCK STEEZY AND YOUNG FIRE!!!". That is about as direct as I can make it. I used your name several times actually.

I dont consider it a diss, cause it was weak as shit. You got a few new friends on the site and you think you're cool as fuck all of a sudden. Trying to write raps, which are below average.

My written "amateur" raps are better than your recorded raps. I'm not gonna say I go hard every time I write, but god damn give me some credit. How were they weak as fuck? That's what a pussy says when he doesn't want to respond. Why are you the only one that thinks it was weak?

You say that, but just a couple weeks ago you were all over my music's dick. And promoting my songs like a bitch. Good one.

And you're rhymes are just so amateur. "Fine, wine, dine, nine". And you dont have punchlines. Flow is good. But flow aint nothing.

And i didnt respond, because ive been recording/mixing/mastering songs like the past 2 days. No time for bitches like yourself. Get at me when you put out a track hater.[/quote:260vf4at]
That was just a little something sir. I'm talkin about the dis on you and steezy. I murdered you. I promoted your music, yes. Did I say your shit is weak as fuck. no (ur mic is)! I don't have punchlines in these raps, because I'm not good at writing raps. I have to memorize them in my head. I get all of my punchlines from my noggin. I don't care if yu make music, and are in "S.S. 4 LIFE!!!!" It makes no difference to me. The first two raps I wrote in this thread I actually tried to rap and make a statement. Now I don't care, they no I can write so I'm just throwing some old ideas that were in my head out onto the table. My words that rhyme don't mean shit. Read all of my lyrics, clearly at the beginning I was telling a story, with a large twist. You need to think outside the box.

[Enigma]

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Gangstaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar, it is your moment of truth.

[Artille]

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Gangstaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar, it is your moment of truth.

trill/enigma what happened to you bro. You've changed so much. You use to give good advice and now you're just a dick. Hanging around SS too much I suppose. Or maybe you've been a dick.

[Enigma]

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Gangstaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar, it is your moment of truth.

trill/enigma what happened to you bro. You've changed so much. You use to give good advice and now you're just a dick. Hanging around SS too much I suppose. Or maybe you've been a dick.

Hmm, I'm pretty sure I'm the same person, I mean I am after all the same guy typing this as always. Might be a bit on the attack I guess with Jrock. I go by "Only the strong survive", and I smell pussy when Jrock posts .

On the real, I don't think I've done anything wrong except diss beaner, correct me if I'm wrong, oh and besides the spamming.

Are you saying I don't give good advice anymore

[biggie>wayne]

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see this of the dome contest ill win,like pin the tail on the donkey,i hit every time, always gotta shine,
i stay rhymin the right lines, award show let me in to get my grammy, my work is art like gallery,
my pockets gainin calrioes,so there fat, get that wack shit back, u know who i be and u know how to see,
so look at me and find me in the wind,im high as a airplane fin, i keep the sin to a limit, but i smoke the weed to the limit,
if its a sin then i go to hell every day, i guess ill be smokin with satan,sharing blunts with the devil, nah but im good,
forget the weed look at the guy inside, this dude is full of love and life, and shoot back if they fuck with us,
cause us we dont fuck with noth, we pull with guns, aim at the lung,then alot of blood, eww red down his chest,
he falls to his feet time for rest, its best u die here so everybody else dont tell, cause i aint tryin to go down cause ill have the unluck, damn thats just what it is thats how i flow, like it or leave or end it, and scream...

[Artille]

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Gangstaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar, it is your moment of truth.

trill/enigma what happened to you bro. You've changed so much. You use to give good advice and now you're just a dick. Hanging around SS too much I suppose. Or maybe you've been a dick.

Hmm, I'm pretty sure I'm the same person, I mean I am after all the same guy typing this as always. Might be a bit on the attack I guess with Jrock. I go by "Only the strong survive", and I smell pussy when Jrock posts .

On the real, I don't think I've done anything wrong except diss beaner, correct me if I'm wrong, oh and besides the spamming.

Are you saying I don't give good advice anymore

You don't give ANY advice anymore!

You should probably just let the Jrock thing go, it's not that serious

[biggie>wayne]

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this turned out to be a good thread