Re: Of The Dome-Contest
Oh my god, I'm not lying either but Bliss shitted on you jrock. It's kind of funny how you said all this shit about his verse not getting started but yours is full of fillers, dumbass. Let's critique.
BLISS
Straight closer.[/quote]
JROCK
Wtf? Really? stupid shit that's no kind of diss.
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Honestly and me sneaking in curse words to you showing how bad you actually are, Bliss did straight wreck you. You barely had any good, creative disses. I don't think you had any punches and you had more fillers than Him, which you said he had and was bitching about. We've had this problem before Bliss, Jcock doesn't know what a rap battle is about, he just lollygags around gloating on himself and is like "Wah wah why did I lose?" He doesn't get what a rap battle is about, in turn he fails and questions others who do it right.
Bliss, you need to tell him his two verses aren't worth your first one, just stop.
As far as Jcock goes, your record is now 13-3 with many forfeits and no shows, you're a joke.
Oh my god, I'm not lying either but Bliss shitted on you jrock. It's kind of funny how you said all this shit about his verse not getting started but yours is full of fillers, dumbass. Let's critique.
BLISS
You're off topic in saying that
But to stay on topic:
Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
It's not superb, but lol worthy.
Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
Not great
Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
Creative, I like it.
I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
Straight
J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
It's okay.
She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
Straight even though not about him.
Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
Not a diss but still cool.
J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
But to stay on topic:
Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
It's not superb, but lol worthy.
Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
Not great
Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
Creative, I like it.
I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
Straight
J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
It's okay.
She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
Straight even though not about him.
Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
Not a diss but still cool.
J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
JROCK
I'm a critical thinker, monumental speaker
blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
Filler, has nothing to do with Bliss, quit bullshitting about yourself.
hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
"Qlicks" wtf is that? And ammonium isn't a metal as Bliss pointed out, sounds like a water party.
you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
Not much of a diss honestly, and crisp? really? fail
i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
His name is bliss, not bless. Get your english right. Second line is the best of yours so far.
im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
Don't realize how a strand of DNA behind is a punch? not that good.
fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
...Filler...this is about Bliss not the bitch below, fail.
squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
You're saying you came on a dude, wow you're gay and I'm putting that in my sig.
to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.
blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
Filler, has nothing to do with Bliss, quit bullshitting about yourself.
hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
"Qlicks" wtf is that? And ammonium isn't a metal as Bliss pointed out, sounds like a water party.
you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
Not much of a diss honestly, and crisp? really? fail
i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
His name is bliss, not bless. Get your english right. Second line is the best of yours so far.
im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
Don't realize how a strand of DNA behind is a punch? not that good.
fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
...Filler...this is about Bliss not the bitch below, fail.
squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
You're saying you came on a dude, wow you're gay and I'm putting that in my sig.
to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.
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Honestly and me sneaking in curse words to you showing how bad you actually are, Bliss did straight wreck you. You barely had any good, creative disses. I don't think you had any punches and you had more fillers than Him, which you said he had and was bitching about. We've had this problem before Bliss, Jcock doesn't know what a rap battle is about, he just lollygags around gloating on himself and is like "Wah wah why did I lose?" He doesn't get what a rap battle is about, in turn he fails and questions others who do it right.
Bliss, you need to tell him his two verses aren't worth your first one, just stop.
As far as Jcock goes, your record is now 13-3 with many forfeits and no shows, you're a joke.
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