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  • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

    Oh my god, I'm not lying either but Bliss shitted on you jrock. It's kind of funny how you said all this shit about his verse not getting started but yours is full of fillers, dumbass. Let's critique.


    BLISS

    You're off topic in saying that

    But to stay on topic:

    Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
    Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
    It's not superb, but lol worthy.

    Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
    It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
    Not great

    Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
    I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
    Creative, I like it.

    I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
    But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
    Straight

    J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
    So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
    It's okay.

    She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
    Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
    Straight even though not about him.

    Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
    Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
    Not a diss but still cool.

    J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
    Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
    Straight closer.[/quote]

    JROCK

    I'm a critical thinker, monumental speaker
    blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
    Filler, has nothing to do with Bliss, quit bullshitting about yourself.

    hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
    i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
    "Qlicks" wtf is that? And ammonium isn't a metal as Bliss pointed out, sounds like a water party.


    you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
    i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
    Not much of a diss honestly, and crisp? really? fail

    i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
    my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
    His name is bliss, not bless. Get your english right. Second line is the best of yours so far.

    im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
    i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
    Don't realize how a strand of DNA behind is a punch? not that good.

    fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
    the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
    ...Filler...this is about Bliss not the bitch below, fail.

    squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
    an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
    You're saying you came on a dude, wow you're gay and I'm putting that in my sig.

    to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.
    Wtf? Really? stupid shit that's no kind of diss.


    [/quote]

    Honestly and me sneaking in curse words to you showing how bad you actually are, Bliss did straight wreck you. You barely had any good, creative disses. I don't think you had any punches and you had more fillers than Him, which you said he had and was bitching about. We've had this problem before Bliss, Jcock doesn't know what a rap battle is about, he just lollygags around gloating on himself and is like "Wah wah why did I lose?" He doesn't get what a rap battle is about, in turn he fails and questions others who do it right.
    Bliss, you need to tell him his two verses aren't worth your first one, just stop.

    As far as Jcock goes, your record is now 13-3 with many forfeits and no shows, you're a joke.
    I like the color contrasts


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    • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

      Originally posted by Enigma
      Oh my god, I'm not lying either but Bliss shitted on you jrock. It's kind of funny how you said all this shit about his verse not getting started but yours is full of fillers, dumbass. Let's critique.


      BLISS

      You're off topic in saying that

      But to stay on topic:

      Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
      Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
      It's not superb, but lol worthy.

      Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
      It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
      Not great

      Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
      I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
      Creative, I like it.

      I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
      But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
      Straight

      J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
      So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
      It's okay.

      She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
      Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
      Straight even though not about him.

      Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
      Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
      Not a diss but still cool.

      J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
      Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
      Straight closer.
      JROCK

      I'm a critical thinker, monumental speaker
      blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
      Filler, has nothing to do with Bliss, quit bullshitting about yourself.

      hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
      i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
      "Qlicks" wtf is that? And ammonium isn't a metal as Bliss pointed out, sounds like a water party.


      you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
      i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
      Not much of a diss honestly, and crisp? really? fail

      i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
      my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
      His name is bliss, not bless. Get your english right. Second line is the best of yours so far.

      im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
      i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
      Don't realize how a strand of DNA behind is a punch? not that good.

      fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
      the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
      ...Filler...this is about Bliss not the bitch below, fail.

      squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
      an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
      You're saying you came on a dude, wow you're gay and I'm putting that in my sig.

      to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.
      Wtf? Really? stupid shit that's no kind of diss.


      [/quote]

      Honestly and me sneaking in curse words to you showing how bad you actually are, Bliss did straight wreck you. You barely had any good, creative disses. I don't think you had any punches and you had more fillers than Him, which you said he had and was bitching about. We've had this problem before Bliss, Jcock doesn't know what a rap battle is about, he just lollygags around gloating on himself and is like "Wah wah why did I lose?" He doesn't get what a rap battle is about, in turn he fails and questions others who do it right.
      Bliss, you need to tell him his two verses aren't worth your first one, just stop.

      As far as Jcock goes, your record is now 13-3 with many forfeits and no shows, you're a joke.[/quote]

      this is freestylin wtf are you talking about, this isn't legit, thought of ranked battle. this is off the dome.. suppose to be

      but anyway appreciate whatever feedback you gave, anyone else have time to judge? and off the dome doesn't count in battling dumbass, if so i murdered skim, dizzy, and YMC in here so it would be 16-2. but doesn't count so it's 13-2 still

      P.S learn how to quote someone right at least, your shit was discombobulating.
      Other P.S: anyone else see how he said the other dude's fillers was okay but my fillers i was "bullshitting" myself? your automatically dickriding therefor i do not accept and appreciate your feedback. fucking cunt


      Y.O.L.O

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      • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

        Shut the fuck up Pablo, you never murdered me. And you're not 13-2. You lost to Trill TWICE, and me ONCE. That equals three losses beaner. You cant even add? They didnt teach you that in Atlanta, New York? LOL. And you havent even won 13 battles. Stop with that fake battle record bullshit.

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        • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

          Does anyone else see that? Out of all of jcock's errors and me critiquing his pathetic shit, all he can say is that I need to get the quoting thing fixed...lmao.

          DID ANYONE HAVE A HARD TIME READING WHAT I QUOTED AND HOW I QUOTED IT? Please speak up if you did, or is it just the cry baby beaner mad because he got his ass beatdown by Bliss with his first or one of his first raps on here. You're the amateur jcock you sorry fuck. You can't count, your record is SHIT.
          I like the color contrasts


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          • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

            Originally posted by skimdudee420
            Shut the fuck up Pablo, you never murdered me. And you're not 13-2. You lost to Trill TWICE, and me ONCE. That equals three losses beaner. You cant even add? They didnt teach you that in Atlanta, New York? LOL. And you havent even won 13 battles. Stop with that fake battle record bullshit.
            Who ever said they lived in ATL? smfh you do look like the person to lie and say random shit and put words in ppl's mouth
            and i didn't lose to you dipshit, it was called a disqualification so don't make it seem like you shitted or me or some B/S

            my current record remains 18-2 or 13-2 one or the other. btw if im not mistaking still the best record on HQ.


            Y.O.L.O

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            • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

              Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
              Originally posted by skimdudee420
              Shut the fuck up Pablo, you never murdered me. And you're not 13-2. You lost to Trill TWICE, and me ONCE. That equals three losses beaner. You cant even add? They didnt teach you that in Atlanta, New York? LOL. And you havent even won 13 battles. Stop with that fake battle record bullshit.
              Who ever said they lived in ATL? smfh you do look like the person to lie and say random shit and put words in ppl's mouth
              and i didn't lose to you dipshit, it was called a disqualification so don't make it seem like you shitted or me or some B/S

              my current record remains 18-2 or 13-2 one or the other. btw if im not mistaking still the best record on HQ.
              You're 13-3 AT BEST, I'm pretty sure when a fighter gets DQ'd it's a loss dumbass, and you're not the best considering you steal lyrics, Which nullifies you being ranked in all books I'm very sure. He's making a joke about you saying Washington is in seattle, but you're too stupid to catch that you dumb ass. I can't believe you actually tried telling me your parents are a lawyer and a doctor. You should kill yourself for actually saying that.
              I like the color contrasts


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              • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                DISQUALIFICATION = LOSS. Plus everyone said i shitted on you and your stolen lyrics anyways.

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                • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                  Originally posted by skimdudee420
                  DISQUALIFICATION = LOSS. Plus everyone said i shitted on you and your stolen lyrics anyways.
                  LMAO quote those lines plz!!! how can you shit on me and those wasn't my lyrics in the first place???

                  Im done talking about that battle skim, if your such a "G" let's do a two round, 16-32 bar battle, legit, poll voting + the person has to post who and why they voted for. if you accept it will kick off Friday anytime bwetten 6-12 P:M midnight

                  no show = disqualification = Lost. if you accept either PM me or tell me here. if not do me a favor and stfu

                  The End.


                  Y.O.L.O

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                  • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                    Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
                    Originally posted by Enigma
                    Oh my god, I'm not lying either but Bliss shitted on you jrock. It's kind of funny how you said all this shit about his verse not getting started but yours is full of fillers, dumbass. Let's critique.


                    BLISS

                    You're off topic in saying that

                    But to stay on topic:

                    Lyrical J rock, softer than fluffy socks,
                    Pussy ass bitch, gang banged by six cocks,
                    It's not superb, but lol worthy.

                    Check 1,2,3, you know who's coming,
                    It's that boy with the magic flow, now you running,
                    Not great

                    Fuck with me I'm reveal my tommy gun or something,
                    I'm the mains like turkey, you ain't nothing but stuffing,
                    Creative, I like it.

                    I only fine dine, I ain't in to taco bell,
                    But I'm so hood and I'll crush you like taco shell,
                    Straight

                    J Rock won't reply he's got no reproductive cell,
                    So you're girl gon' come meet me at my hotel,
                    It's okay.

                    She won't be checking out at 6 in the morning,
                    Cause I'll kill that bitch on the spot, fore-warning,
                    Straight even though not about him.

                    Don't mess with me, boy you ain't in my league,
                    Non-stop flow, my vocab don't use fatigue,
                    Not a diss but still cool.

                    J Rock take a look I think you just got mail,
                    Telling you I'm the shit and I'm leaving me a trail.
                    Straight closer.
                    JROCK

                    [quote:qwz3gpsr]I'm a critical thinker, monumental speaker
                    blunts in the ride, chrome to the side
                    Filler, has nothing to do with Bliss, quit bullshitting about yourself.

                    hollowtips are for lames in Qlicks
                    i only carry bullets covered with ammonium clips
                    "Qlicks" wtf is that? And ammonium isn't a metal as Bliss pointed out, sounds like a water party.


                    you wanna ride my dick, stand in line & get a grip
                    i will leave you dark and crisp like a solar eclipse
                    Not much of a diss honestly, and crisp? really? fail

                    i wouldn't bliss you if you sneeze and landed in shit
                    my rhymes shatter your bones like the epicenter of an earthquake
                    His name is bliss, not bless. Get your english right. Second line is the best of yours so far.

                    im your worst nightmare you wont live to see another day
                    i just verbally murked you, looks like i left behind a string of DNA
                    Don't realize how a strand of DNA behind is a punch? not that good.

                    fuck that replicate, duplicate, now translate to RNA
                    the bitch below you can suck on my pistol
                    ...Filler...this is about Bliss not the bitch below, fail.

                    squeeze the trigger, just lyrically came on her male-like genitals
                    an emcee career that dies, another idiot tries
                    You're saying you came on a dude, wow you're gay and I'm putting that in my sig.

                    to stir up a rise only to stir up a supersize.
                    Wtf? Really? stupid shit that's no kind of diss.


                    [/quote:qwz3gpsr]

                    Honestly and me sneaking in curse words to you showing how bad you actually are, Bliss did straight wreck you. You barely had any good, creative disses. I don't think you had any punches and you had more fillers than Him, which you said he had and was bitching about. We've had this problem before Bliss, Jcock doesn't know what a rap battle is about, he just lollygags around gloating on himself and is like "Wah wah why did I lose?" He doesn't get what a rap battle is about, in turn he fails and questions others who do it right.
                    Bliss, you need to tell him his two verses aren't worth your first one, just stop.

                    As far as Jcock goes, your record is now 13-3 with many forfeits and no shows, you're a joke.[/quote]

                    this is freestylin wtf are you talking about, this isn't legit, thought of ranked battle. this is off the dome.. suppose to be

                    but anyway appreciate whatever feedback you gave, anyone else have time to judge? and off the dome doesn't count in battling dumbass, if so i murdered skim, dizzy, and YMC in here so it would be 16-2. but doesn't count so it's 13-2 still

                    P.S learn how to quote someone right at least, your shit was discombobulating.
                    Other P.S: anyone else see how he said the other dude's fillers was okay but my fillers i was "bullshitting" myself? your automatically dickriding therefor i do not accept and appreciate your feedback. fucking cunt[/quote]

                    YOU DIDN'T EVEN QUOTE ME RIGHT YOU DUMBASS, God kill yourself man I swear you need to, the dumbest person I've ever seen type on a computer. Little kids are smarter than you.
                    I like the color contrasts


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                    • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                      Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
                      Originally posted by skimdudee420
                      DISQUALIFICATION = LOSS. Plus everyone said i shitted on you and your stolen lyrics anyways.
                      LMAO quote those lines plz!!! how can you shit on me and those wasn't my lyrics in the first place???

                      Im done talking about that battle skim, if your such a "G" let's do a two round, 16-32 bar battle, legit, poll voting + the person has to post who and why they voted for. if you accept it will kick off Friday anytime bwetten 6-12 P:M midnight

                      no show = disqualification = Lost. if you accept either PM me or tell me here. if not do me a favor and stfu

                      The End.
                      I think if those are the rules, this is for the sake of your own rematch, seeing as you lost the first round. I say it should be audio skim
                      I like the color contrasts


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                      • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                        If this battle is on, loser leaves forums.
                        Cash Flow Ent

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                        • Re: Of The Dome-Contest

                          Originally posted by Enigma
                          Originally posted by Lyrical JRock
                          Originally posted by skimdudee420
                          DISQUALIFICATION = LOSS. Plus everyone said i shitted on you and your stolen lyrics anyways.
                          LMAO quote those lines plz!!! how can you shit on me and those wasn't my lyrics in the first place???

                          Im done talking about that battle skim, if your such a "G" let's do a two round, 16-32 bar battle, legit, poll voting + the person has to post who and why they voted for. if you accept it will kick off Friday anytime bwetten 6-12 P:M midnight

                          no show = disqualification = Lost. if you accept either PM me or tell me here. if not do me a favor and stfu

                          The End.
                          I think if those are the rules, this is for the sake of your own rematch, seeing as you lost the first round. I say it should be audio skim
                          i agree cause who knows he might steal lyrics again
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