Off the Dome-Contest

[IAmJay]

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Wrote this in class.

Sitting here in class, all these thoughts in my head
Thinking of my past, wondering if I should be alive or dead
But now I hope you reminisce all the times you layed on my bed
Yeah.. You only live your life just one time
You're running through my head, I'm going crazy in mind
You move on like if there's nigga's waiting in line
But in reality, a good girl is always hard to find..
Expect me to never come running back to you
Because that's the same shit that I always do
I was your man but you had somebody new
When I was thinking of you, I was treated like a fool.
But now you want me back, but its not gonna happen
Before you were the same girl, you were just laughin

That's all I did for a couple of minutes. Feedback?

[Stryder]

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Wrote this in class.

Sitting here in class, all these thoughts in my head
Thinking of my past, wondering if I should be alive or dead
But now I hope you reminisce all the times you layed on my bed
Yeah.. You only live your life just one time
You're running through my head, I'm going crazy in mind
You move on like if there's nigga's waiting in line
But in reality, a good girl is always hard to find..
Expect me to never come running back to you
Because that's the same shit that I always do
I was your man but you had somebody new
When I was thinking of you, I was treated like a fool.
But now you want me back, but its not gonna happen
Before you were the same girl, you were just laughin

That's all I did for a couple of minutes. Feedback?

HAHAHA i can relate to this shit , som ereal shit right ere Props man

[IAmJay]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Wrote this in class.

Sitting here in class, all these thoughts in my head
Thinking of my past, wondering if I should be alive or dead
But now I hope you reminisce all the times you layed on my bed
Yeah.. You only live your life just one time
You're running through my head, I'm going crazy in mind
You move on like if there's nigga's waiting in line
But in reality, a good girl is always hard to find..
Expect me to never come running back to you
Because that's the same shit that I always do
I was your man but you had somebody new
When I was thinking of you, I was treated like a fool.
But now you want me back, but its not gonna happen
Before you were the same girl, you were just laughin

That's all I did for a couple of minutes. Feedback?

HAHAHA i can relate to this shit , som ereal shit right ere Props man

Thanks bro.

[eyecandii]

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Its been a while since I freestyled in the forum
I guess this shit supposed to be a cure for my boredom
Been readin thru da beefin and da shit is kinda funny
Dis nigga on da net talkin real cash money
If u didnt get that, it means he talkin shit
But when somebody call him on it, den he wanna quit
I really dont get why niggaz steal peoples lines
If a nigga bitin me den Im gonna get mines
Put his ass on front street like a newspaper
Call his bluff, get a nigga steamed like vapor
I rap about shit that relates to me
No guns or violence nigga, jus pussy and weed
Dont forget about money, got plenty of that
And this nigga's a pussy, no feline no cat
Jus a straight up bitch boy talkin shit on da net
Jcock the beaner, you dont pose a threat.

16 bars straight off the dome, wat u got on me nigga? LOL!

[JrockHQ]

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Its been a while since I freestyled in the forum
I guess this shit supposed to be a cure for my boredom
Been readin thru da beefin and da shit is kinda funny
Dis nigga on da net talkin real cash money
If u didnt get that, it means he talkin shit
But when somebody call him on it, den he wanna quit
I really dont get why niggaz steal peoples lines
If a nigga bitin me den Im gonna get mines
Put his ass on front street like a newspaper
Call his bluff, get a nigga steamed like vapor
I rap about shit that relates to me
No guns or violence nigga, jus pussy and weed
Dont forget about money, got plenty of that
And this nigga's a pussy, no feline no cat
Jus a straight up bitch boy talkin shit on da net
Jcock the beaner, you dont pose a threat.

16 bars straight off the dome, wat u got on me nigga? LOL!

Woah your a chick right, but your rapping about pussy and weed? are you homosexual or is this a dude putting on a front

i was gonna reply, but after seeing that. i know it's some dude. wouldn't surpise me if it a member on HQ. expose

that 16 bar cannot be off the dome because you spent time to think about it while typing. do ppl think im retarded

[Enigma]

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Its been a while since I freestyled in the forum
I guess this shit supposed to be a cure for my boredom
Been readin thru da beefin and da shit is kinda funny
Dis nigga on da net talkin real cash money
If u didnt get that, it means he talkin shit
But when somebody call him on it, den he wanna quit
I really dont get why niggaz steal peoples lines
If a nigga bitin me den Im gonna get mines
Put his ass on front street like a newspaper
Call his bluff, get a nigga steamed like vapor
I rap about shit that relates to me
No guns or violence nigga, jus pussy and weed
Dont forget about money, got plenty of that
And this nigga's a pussy, no feline no cat
Jus a straight up bitch boy talkin shit on da net
Jcock the beaner, you dont pose a threat.

16 bars straight off the dome, wat u got on me nigga? LOL!

Woah your a chick right, but your rapping about pussy and weed? are you homosexual or is this a dude putting on a front

i was gonna reply, but after seeing that. i know it's some dude. wouldn't surpise me if it a member on HQ. expose

that 16 bar cannot be off the dome because you spent time to think about it while typing. do ppl think im retarded

Damn...she ate your pussy up like shrimp fried rice Jcock

Oh, and on the side note, yes we do think you're retarded.

[YoungFire420]

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Damn...she ate your pussy up like shrimp fried rice Jcock

Oh, and on the side note, yes we do think you're retarded.

HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!

CO SIGN!

[JrockHQ]

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Ok look at her avatar pic, now look at her myspace pics http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.c ... =325724180

you tell me if that's the same person or not. like i said, shes a fake. it's a dude behind that keyboard.

[YoungFire420]

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Ok look at her avatar pic, now look at her myspace pics http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.c ... =325724180

you tell me if that's the same person or not. like i said, shes a fake. it's a dude behind that keyboard.

Im not sure about in Mexico, but in AMERICA there are some girls that are bi...

[Enigma]

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The fuck are you making excuses about? They look relatively the same to me. EyeCandi, since Jcock doesn't want to admit getting his pussy eaten up by you and thinks you're a fake, can you prove your legitimacy to this faggot.
Actually, SCRATCH THAT, I just realized this is the same as you beaner boy, SHE doesn't owe shit to you, you steal songs, which is with no question true, and you're speculating on her. You call her a fake, you're the damn fake bitch.

[IAmJay]

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Another.

Physic flow, yeah I can tell your future
I could teach you a thing or two, I'll be your tutor
When your girl suck my dick, she open her mouth like she had a tumor..
Yeah, I see eyes looking above me so I gotta get em' fast
Chasing my dream like a race, always first, never last
Never that, another homerun I'll hit you with the bat
Running like the Olympics so I gotta stay on track
I am sticking to the top like a tack..
Get it? Or let me make it more clear
Standing on my reign, but see nobody up here
Bring your whole army, let me show I have no fear..
And by the end, I will make true history
Never lose, so once again I claim my victory.

[Enigma]

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Another.

Physic flow, yeah I can tell your future
I could teach you a thing or two, I'll be your tutor
When your girl suck my dick, she open her mouth like she had a tumor..
Too long

Yeah, I see eyes looking above me so I gotta get em' fast
Chasing my dream like a race, always first, never last
Never that, another homerun I'll hit you with the bat
Running like the Olympics so I gotta stay on track
Sorry but this is rather cliche, needs to be brought in a new way.

I am sticking to the top like a tack..
Get it? Or let me make it more clear
Standing on my reign, but see nobody up here
You mean "rein"

Bring your whole army, let me show I have no fear..
And by the end, I will make true history
Never lose, so once again I claim my victory.