Off the Dome-Contest

[JrockHQ]

Re: Of The Dome-Contest

Its been a while since I freestyled in the forum
I guess this shit supposed to be a cure for my boredom
Been readin thru da beefin and da shit is kinda funny
Dis nigga on da net talkin real cash money
If u didnt get that, it means he talkin shit
But when somebody call him on it, den he wanna quit
I really dont get why niggaz steal peoples lines
If a nigga bitin me den Im gonna get mines
Put his ass on front street like a newspaper
Call his bluff, get a nigga steamed like vapor
I rap about shit that relates to me
No guns or violence nigga, jus pussy and weed
Dont forget about money, got plenty of that
And this nigga's a pussy, no feline no cat
Jus a straight up bitch boy talkin shit on da net
Jcock the beaner, you dont pose a threat.

16 bars straight off the dome, wat u got on me nigga? LOL!

She talks about getting pussy and weed
my rhymes are raw that would make her pre-menstruational bleed
Skim & Trill is a bitch for trying to egg me on
im about to serve this bitch like a outback steakhouse filet mignon
you say im fake and im wack, i got a 357 magnum ready to get your skull a crack
im lyrically on another level, levitating on fame
while niggas steady jocking and debating over my game
your flow is whack, infact, why dont you put the microphone back
Cause you cant write, actually, you might make it onto a track
A skit maybe, but this would be better, one where the trains be
It pains me, to see, a mc, getting wound up in the Jrock's Debris
Im focus and mellow like wiz khalifa
but your flow failed to sting like muhammad ali
im the most hated, rated, congratulated
but at the end of the day, who's music gets the most appreciated?
don't pull a jay-z, battle a real mc, get ethered and say publicly "that didn't phase me"

Feedback

[Enigma]

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Its been a while since I freestyled in the forum
I guess this shit supposed to be a cure for my boredom
Been readin thru da beefin and da shit is kinda funny
Dis nigga on da net talkin real cash money
If u didnt get that, it means he talkin shit
But when somebody call him on it, den he wanna quit
I really dont get why niggaz steal peoples lines
If a nigga bitin me den Im gonna get mines
Put his ass on front street like a newspaper
Call his bluff, get a nigga steamed like vapor
I rap about shit that relates to me
No guns or violence nigga, jus pussy and weed
Dont forget about money, got plenty of that
And this nigga's a pussy, no feline no cat
Jus a straight up bitch boy talkin shit on da net
Jcock the beaner, you dont pose a threat.

16 bars straight off the dome, wat u got on me nigga? LOL!

She talks about getting pussy and weed
my rhymes are raw that would make her pre-menstruational bleed
Skim & Trill is a bitch for trying to egg me on
im about to serve this bitch like a outback steakhouse filet mignon
you say im fake and im wack, i got a 357 magnum ready to get your skull a crack
im lyrically on another level, levitating on fame
while niggas steady jocking and debating over my game
your flow is whack, infact, why dont you put the microphone back
Cause you cant write, actually, you might make it onto a track
A skit maybe, but this would be better, one where the trains be
It pains me, to see, a mc, getting wound up in the Jrock's Debris
Im focus and mellow like wiz khalifa
but your flow failed to sting like muhammad ali
im the most hated, rated, congratulated
but at the end of the day, who's music gets the most appreciated?
don't pull a jay-z, battle a real mc, get ethered and say publicly "that didn't phase me"

You had one good line that was cut down because you type with the beaner exposed in you. The first two lines were the ones with potential, but you fucked them up. Your verse was...gets the calculator...roughly 87.5% fillers

And I don't egg you on since you're a fake to begin with,
Just swallow your ese's egg whites and get to lyrical weight liftin'.


I thought you foe'd me and can't read my posts jcock, what happened?

[IAmJay]

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Another.

Physic flow, yeah I can tell your future
I could teach you a thing or two, I'll be your tutor
When your girl suck my dick, she open her mouth like she had a tumor..
Too long

Yeah, I see eyes looking above me so I gotta get em' fast
Chasing my dream like a race, always first, never last
Never that, another homerun I'll hit you with the bat
Running like the Olympics so I gotta stay on track
Sorry but this is rather cliche, needs to be brought in a new way.

I am sticking to the top like a tack..
Get it? Or let me make it more clear
Standing on my reign, but see nobody up here
You mean "rein"

Bring your whole army, let me show I have no fear..
And by the end, I will make true history
Never lose, so once again I claim my victory.

Its "reign" look it up.

[Enigma]

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[quote=Lil' Jay]

Another.

Physic flow, yeah I can tell your future
I could teach you a thing or two, I'll be your tutor
When your girl suck my dick, she open her mouth like she had a tumor..
Too long

Yeah, I see eyes looking above me so I gotta get em' fast
Chasing my dream like a race, always first, never last
Never that, another homerun I'll hit you with the bat
Running like the Olympics so I gotta stay on track
Sorry but this is rather cliche, needs to be brought in a new way.

I am sticking to the top like a tack..
Get it? Or let me make it more clear
Standing on my reign, but see nobody up here
You mean "rein"

Bring your whole army, let me show I have no fear..
And by the end, I will make true history
Never lose, so once again I claim my victory.

Its "reign" look it up.[/quote:1y26venp]

Standing on your royal rule or authority
Standing on your dominating power

You have the right term, you worded it awkward. There.

[Young Corruption]

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jrock you make me wanna pull the cock
and put a bullet through my brain
i mean your rhymes are so lame
please just get out of the game
i'm usually a chilled dude
but now i'm about to be the rude dude
call my rhymes weak
i still haven't reached my peak
why you picking at the new girl
you scared her rhymes gonna make you hurl
you say your the best
but please your nothing but a pest
i'm now coming out of my shell
and this is my fare well

[JrockHQ]

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@Enigma,
obviously i read what ya'll had to say about her diss to me, and my reply. but that's the only thing i read since i foe'd you lol so don't get your hopes up. most of my rhymes where fillers b/c... i don't have shit on her, shes new here i didn't even see her until 2 days ago. wtf am i suppose to say about her? think... and anyone who else has feedback is appreciated.

Edit* i see snowman99 wanted to get involve (again) picking? she came at me (twice) what i suppose to do? ether lol
Im not even responding to that, she came harder then you! lls. no comment

[Enigma]

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@Enigma, obviously i read what ya'll had to say about her diss to me, and my reply. but that's the only thing i read since i foe'd you lol so don't get your hopes up. most of my rhymes where fillers b/c... i don't have shit on her, shes new here i didn't even see her until 2 days ago. wtf am i suppose to say about her? think... and anyone who else has feedback is appreciated.

You don't have to have dirt on someone to diss them, yours wasn't even much of a diss. I think you need to think about some shit to say instead of bitching about her being new. Don't post shit if it's fillers and supposed to be a diss...lmao

If anyone tells you that was good then they're lying, you even admitted to having a shit load of fillers in a diss yet want feedback on it?...ugh I think I need to state this again, You need to think...

[eyecandii]

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LMAO!!! I get off a few hours and come back to this! This is hilarious! Me fake nigga? I got a pic of me holdin up my old music myspace and old personal myspace url.



but if you go to the new myspace music url, it takes you to the very page with the very pictures of mine you claim were fake.

SO i am NOT a dude lol, and yes I am bisexual so what nigga I bet I get more pussy than yo bitch ass lmao!!!

[YoungFire420]

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Pablo just got beasted by another HQ member. First time for him to murked by a girl on here though!!!!

Eye Candii

[eyecandii]

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Oh and jus for the record, all I do is freestyle nigga, I jus type the first thing that comes to mind! And yes I killed you, doesn't matter if Im new to the board, I been in this rap shit for years boy!!!

[eyecandii]

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And if you still dont think im cold nigga, if u still dont believe im a girl, here's a freestyle i jus recorded 2nite!

http://www.mediafire.com/?z3nz5ng0oxw

[Young Corruption]

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@Enigma,
obviously i read what ya'll had to say about her diss to me, and my reply. but that's the only thing i read since i foe'd you lol so don't get your hopes up. most of my rhymes where fillers b/c... i don't have shit on her, shes new here i didn't even see her until 2 days ago. wtf am i suppose to say about her? think... and anyone who else has feedback is appreciated.

Edit* i see snowman99 wanted to get involve (again) picking? she came at me (twice) what i suppose to do? ether lol
Im not even responding to that, she came harder then you! lls. no comment

thats fine that she came harder than me i'm glad she did she just proved herself that she is better than you. and i wasnt trying and i like to keep written stuff nice and simple so you can keep up and understand what i am saying.