100,000 (100 THOU) - Zimmie

[Zimmie]

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/75764-flame-beats-aint-playin.html

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pretty wack i suppose i had some spare time so i thought i'd whip something up

LYRICS

SPOILERi don’t mean to get cynical oh so typical
get my whole and clean up the rest of the residual
sipping on dragons drool dive into an acid pool
open a beach chair on top of the sun
im a rare breed something you can’t find on the run
cut in the spirit grind till my feet numb
juggling thoughts like circus clowns do
im all about my 1 always trying to get 2
i don’t give a fck peep my attitude
take a few feet back and appreciate the magnitude


no matter how hard i try i can’t seem to get rid of you
can’t get rid of fools or you get ridiculed
twisting these squares like rubix cubes
get weird faces when i rip rhymes
no body gets me they only want stale lines
blind, should spit my bars in brail lines
sitting on them transit lines running like energy in my mind
one of a kind yeah peep the scene i come through with an unshakable focus I’m keen
I’m keen to get mine they won’t stop mine
i promise that rest in peace J Dilla
you made magic and i promise to honour that
i honour rap from the new to the way ,way back
you can hear it in the versatility something you rappers lack
spiritually infinite like the holy trinity and thats a fact
jus shine shine like a work mans shoe you know just how i do
you do not exist in the physical i break apart and divide molecules
head in the clouds i was lost till i was found
it my world let it curl and twirl in the palm of my hand
vibing till i wake up in japan praying to the man
reading scriptures from the holy quran
trying to understand what makes up a man


Yo yo listen okay look i leave you in a trance like watching saturday afternoon cartoons
Madvillian im bumping MF DOOM break you apart where you stay have you running back into the womb like its your panic room
Yung scalywag sailing into port with pockets spilling with doubloons
Dont you assume see me in different ways like all the phases of the moon


Come with more tools then inspector gadget
Your flows tragic make you fall back like harry potter magic
Feel the fabric see im legit material
You get scratched like the serial
On a machine gun you no fun like no toy in a cereal
Box walking around a paradox
Chilling with Leonardo Di Vinci pullin out the renaissance
Thats why my raps art your just food at a restaurant
Not every line needs a response i just stand on the moon like neil armstrong
Yeah arm strong like chronic masturbation
Make you fall back like states of stagnation
Dont need no narration of your animation

Twist my intestines flip words make them rhyme
Never check the time lil b yung lean sip on my tears out of fiji bottles
Flip the bottle then put myself in throttle
Uh bang a model in a puddle she want to cuddle
Im like girl u best find a space shuttle and jump in that
Cause yeah immma dab dab dab till i find myself with a hollow skull
You now that i backflip off mars till i turn into a seagull
Dont wanna look feeble lethal tongue kick you back into a prequel
Turn your ass fetal run the game like diesel
Shots fired flatten people kick u off the boat like u illegal
Stick an ice needle in my esopaghus

this point on freestyled off the mind

[WeEeEeEzZzZyYy]

dope but i think you need to work on your flow more

[Zimmie]

dope but i think you need to work on your flow more

Thanks bro what parts specifically would you say are bad flow wise always looking to improve

[mykill]

This wasnt bad, if you take it for the lyrics and not for a song. Works more like a cypher or freestyle for me, since it's not on beat. Reminds me of an old school hip hop song in a sense. Hmm...

Mykill's Verdict: B+

If you ever get bored, shoot me some vocals of a freestyle someday. It's fun to try to find a beat to mesh random vocals with and get them on pace with the song.

[Zimmie]

This wasnt bad, if you take it for the lyrics and not for a song. Works more like a cypher or freestyle for me, since it's not on beat. Reminds me of an old school hip hop song in a sense. Hmm...

Mykill's Verdict: B+

If you ever get bored, shoot me some vocals of a freestyle someday. It's fun to try to find a beat to mesh random vocals with and get them on pace with the song.

I was definitely aiming for a freestyle sort of song thank you heaps for your feedback and i'll send some vocals down sometime soon bro

[THA GR8 M8]

did u let a deaf man line these vocals with the beat?

[Zimmie]

did u let a deaf man line these vocals with the beat?

Haha bro i have no idea what im doing to be fair i recorded this with an headphone mic and slapped it into audacity ive made like 3 songs to date so in learning as i go i suppose

[THA GR8 M8]

Haha bro i have no idea what im doing to be fair i recorded this with an headphone mic and slapped it into audacity ive made like 3 songs to date so in learning as i go i suppose

u need to download a daw from warezbb. get something like mixcraft which is very beginner friendly

[Zimmie]

u need to download a daw from warezbb. get something like mixcraft which is very beginner friendly

i'll give it a look mate thanks

[YMCMB357]

dope but i think you need to work on your flow more

I agree with this.

You need to try and rap on beat

[Zimmie]

I agree with this.

You need to try and rap on beat

I recorded the vocals before the beat but yiur right rapping on beat completes the song

[Laudacity93]

I think the lyrics are sharp, but the rhythm of the flow was a bit much. other than that quality track. Beat is banging as well. B-