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    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/75798-checkmate-jfb-act-3-feat-styles.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/75722-king-kailez-no-fool-i-need-your-support.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/75764-flame-beats-aint-playin.html

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    pretty wack i suppose i had some spare time so i thought i'd whip something up

    LYRICS

    SPOILERi don�t mean to get cynical oh so typical
    get my whole and clean up the rest of the residual
    sipping on dragons drool dive into an acid pool
    open a beach chair on top of the sun
    im a rare breed something you can�t find on the run
    cut in the spirit grind till my feet numb
    juggling thoughts like circus clowns do
    im all about my 1 always trying to get 2
    i don�t give a fck peep my attitude
    take a few feet back and appreciate the magnitude


    no matter how hard i try i can�t seem to get rid of you
    can�t get rid of fools or you get ridiculed
    twisting these squares like rubix cubes
    get weird faces when i rip rhymes
    no body gets me they only want stale lines
    blind, should spit my bars in brail lines
    sitting on them transit lines running like energy in my mind
    one of a kind yeah peep the scene i come through with an unshakable focus I�m keen
    I�m keen to get mine they won�t stop mine
    i promise that rest in peace J Dilla
    you made magic and i promise to honour that
    i honour rap from the new to the way ,way back
    you can hear it in the versatility something you rappers lack
    spiritually infinite like the holy trinity and thats a fact
    jus shine shine like a work mans shoe you know just how i do
    you do not exist in the physical i break apart and divide molecules
    head in the clouds i was lost till i was found
    it my world let it curl and twirl in the palm of my hand
    vibing till i wake up in japan praying to the man
    reading scriptures from the holy quran
    trying to understand what makes up a man


    Yo yo listen okay look i leave you in a trance like watching saturday afternoon cartoons
    Madvillian im bumping MF DOOM break you apart where you stay have you running back into the womb like its your panic room
    Yung scalywag sailing into port with pockets spilling with doubloons
    Dont you assume see me in different ways like all the phases of the moon


    Come with more tools then inspector gadget
    Your flows tragic make you fall back like harry potter magic
    Feel the fabric see im legit material
    You get scratched like the serial
    On a machine gun you no fun like no toy in a cereal
    Box walking around a paradox
    Chilling with Leonardo Di Vinci pullin out the renaissance
    Thats why my raps art your just food at a restaurant
    Not every line needs a response i just stand on the moon like neil armstrong
    Yeah arm strong like chronic masturbation
    Make you fall back like states of stagnation
    Dont need no narration of your animation

    Twist my intestines flip words make them rhyme
    Never check the time lil b yung lean sip on my tears out of fiji bottles
    Flip the bottle then put myself in throttle
    Uh bang a model in a puddle she want to cuddle
    Im like girl u best find a space shuttle and jump in that
    Cause yeah immma dab dab dab till i find myself with a hollow skull
    You now that i backflip off mars till i turn into a seagull
    Dont wanna look feeble lethal tongue kick you back into a prequel
    Turn your ass fetal run the game like diesel
    Shots fired flatten people kick u off the boat like u illegal
    Stick an ice needle in my esopaghus

    this point on freestyled off the mind
    Last edited by Zimmie; 11-30-2016, 09:54 AM.




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  • #2
    dope but i think you need to work on your flow more

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    • #3
      Originally posted by WeEeEeEzZzZyYy View Post
      dope but i think you need to work on your flow more

      Thanks bro what parts specifically would you say are bad flow wise always looking to improve




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      • #4
        This wasnt bad, if you take it for the lyrics and not for a song. Works more like a cypher or freestyle for me, since it's not on beat. Reminds me of an old school hip hop song in a sense. Hmm...

        Mykill's Verdict: B+

        If you ever get bored, shoot me some vocals of a freestyle someday. It's fun to try to find a beat to mesh random vocals with and get them on pace with the song.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by mykill View Post
          This wasnt bad, if you take it for the lyrics and not for a song. Works more like a cypher or freestyle for me, since it's not on beat. Reminds me of an old school hip hop song in a sense. Hmm...

          Mykill's Verdict: B+

          If you ever get bored, shoot me some vocals of a freestyle someday. It's fun to try to find a beat to mesh random vocals with and get them on pace with the song.

          I was definitely aiming for a freestyle sort of song thank you heaps for your feedback and i'll send some vocals down sometime soon bro




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          • #6
            did u let a deaf man line these vocals with the beat?



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            • #7
              Originally posted by THA GR8 M8 View Post
              did u let a deaf man line these vocals with the beat?
              Haha bro i have no idea what im doing to be fair i recorded this with an headphone mic and slapped it into audacity ive made like 3 songs to date so in learning as i go i suppose




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              • #8
                Originally posted by Lil_zimmie View Post
                Haha bro i have no idea what im doing to be fair i recorded this with an headphone mic and slapped it into audacity ive made like 3 songs to date so in learning as i go i suppose
                u need to download a daw from warezbb. get something like mixcraft which is very beginner friendly



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                • #9
                  Originally posted by THA GR8 M8 View Post
                  u need to download a daw from warezbb. get something like mixcraft which is very beginner friendly
                  i'll give it a look mate thanks




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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by WeEeEeEzZzZyYy View Post
                    dope but i think you need to work on your flow more
                    I agree with this.

                    You need to try and rap on beat

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by YMCMB357 View Post
                      I agree with this.

                      You need to try and rap on beat
                      I recorded the vocals before the beat but yiur right rapping on beat completes the song




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                      • #12
                        I think the lyrics are sharp, but the rhythm of the flow was a bit much. other than that quality track. Beat is banging as well. B-
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