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Flow: 8
Lyrics: 7
Beat: 7
The flows matched up well. Some of the lyrics and delivery felt a little forced but I can definitely respect both rappers on this track as practiced people. Beat selection is cool, but I was expecting something a little more aggressive for a track called Mortal Kombat. I think in the future you should try to bridge your verses better. Even a short hook to help transition the listener could be really effective.
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Originally posted by sbineedmoney View PostFlow: 8
Lyrics: 7
Beat: 7
The flows matched up well. Some of the lyrics and delivery felt a little forced but I can definitely respect both rappers on this track as practiced people. Beat selection is cool, but I was expecting something a little more aggressive for a track called Mortal Kombat. I think in the future you should try to bridge your verses better. Even a short hook to help transition the listener could be really effective.
Overall 7/10
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that beat is fire on some real shit im feeling the vibe of this track alot , there is some parts i can hear your mic kinda pop especially on your p sounds , the flow is fine it works and you ride the beat well but its lacking some emotion , unless that was your intent and you was looking to sound laid back but to me it would sound better with some more inflection
3/5 deffo a good song , great beat choice , good bars an flow but few minor issues that if worked on would elevate the song alot
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Originally posted by Gibbsy View Postthat beat is fire on some real shit im feeling the vibe of this track alot , there is some parts i can hear your mic kinda pop especially on your p sounds , the flow is fine it works and you ride the beat well but its lacking some emotion , unless that was your intent and you was looking to sound laid back but to me it would sound better with some more inflection
3/5 deffo a good song , great beat choice , good bars an flow but few minor issues that if worked on would elevate the song alot
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-_- came correct... no lie... zimmie's tennis line was good. very solid. again, mixing could use a little work but the both of you did solid work on this freestyle-type track. Nice job.
Mykill's Verdict: B+
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Originally posted by mykill View Post-_- came correct... no lie... zimmie's tennis line was good. very solid. again, mixing could use a little work but the both of you did solid work on this freestyle-type track. Nice job.
Mykill's Verdict: B+
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