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    song we made ages ago for a planned EP




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    Flow: 8
    Lyrics: 7
    Beat: 7

    The flows matched up well. Some of the lyrics and delivery felt a little forced but I can definitely respect both rappers on this track as practiced people. Beat selection is cool, but I was expecting something a little more aggressive for a track called Mortal Kombat. I think in the future you should try to bridge your verses better. Even a short hook to help transition the listener could be really effective.

    Overall 7/10
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    • #3
      nah is that [MENTION=63546]-_-[/MENTION] fr? boy was slidin 🔥🔥



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      • #4
        Originally posted by THA GR8 M8 View Post
        nah is that @-_- fr? boy was slidin 

        Yeah he bodied that shit




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        • #5
          Originally posted by sbineedmoney View Post
          Flow: 8
          Lyrics: 7
          Beat: 7

          The flows matched up well. Some of the lyrics and delivery felt a little forced but I can definitely respect both rappers on this track as practiced people. Beat selection is cool, but I was expecting something a little more aggressive for a track called Mortal Kombat. I think in the future you should try to bridge your verses better. Even a short hook to help transition the listener could be really effective.

          Overall 7/10
          thank you heaps fam really good advice the song was meant to be a lot longer but my man [MENTION=63546]-_-[/MENTION] has vanished for awhile and i was sick of the song sitting on my computer so i thought id drop it




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          • #6
            that beat is fire on some real shit im feeling the vibe of this track alot , there is some parts i can hear your mic kinda pop especially on your p sounds , the flow is fine it works and you ride the beat well but its lacking some emotion , unless that was your intent and you was looking to sound laid back but to me it would sound better with some more inflection

            3/5 deffo a good song , great beat choice , good bars an flow but few minor issues that if worked on would elevate the song alot


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            • #7
              Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
              that beat is fire on some real shit im feeling the vibe of this track alot , there is some parts i can hear your mic kinda pop especially on your p sounds , the flow is fine it works and you ride the beat well but its lacking some emotion , unless that was your intent and you was looking to sound laid back but to me it would sound better with some more inflection

              3/5 deffo a good song , great beat choice , good bars an flow but few minor issues that if worked on would elevate the song alot
              thanks fam it definitely could be improved thank you for your review




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              • #8
                I like the flow at some points when you was like "I'll eat your soul and leave shatter"
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                • #9
                  White everywhere, like a shootout at a sofa store

                  damn lmao

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by lilweezyfan View Post
                    White everywhere, like a shootout at a sofa store

                    damn lmao

                    dude bodied that shit fam

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                    Originally posted by Mobbin Moe View Post
                    I like the flow at some points when you was like "I'll eat your soul and leave shatter"
                    Thanks fam




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                    • #11
                      -_- came correct... no lie... zimmie's tennis line was good. very solid. again, mixing could use a little work but the both of you did solid work on this freestyle-type track. Nice job.

                      Mykill's Verdict: B+

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by mykill View Post
                        -_- came correct... no lie... zimmie's tennis line was good. very solid. again, mixing could use a little work but the both of you did solid work on this freestyle-type track. Nice job.

                        Mykill's Verdict: B+
                        thanks bruh i did get renegaded though haha




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