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  • Artille Official Thread [Written Only] [Updated Feb. 20]

    Well I figured it's time for me to make my own thread. As of now this is only for written lyrics, as I current do not have a mic to record. I will post all updates here as well.

    UPDATES(February 20, 2010)
    Check out my latest verses... "Fuck 'Em All (Preview)"
    WRITTENS

    Fuck 'Em All (Preview)(February 20, 2010)
    I say fuck ‘em all, just let them die
    You better turn your head when I look you in the eye
    When I come in the room you get fuckin’ scared
    They be like “AH! Artille! Everybody beware!”
    Haha… Yea I wrote this with passion
    But let me stop rappin’, and get to bashin’
    Let me start off with that queer YNR
    You’re the biggest bitch on the forums by far
    A Canadian fag, whose 20 years old
    Been rappin for years, with no records sold
    You can hardly get downloads from your own crew
    Maybe cause your flow is crap and your lyrics are poo
    Remember when I lent some bars to you
    And you didn’t give credit where credit was due?
    This dude goes in the chat and says to go get a job
    Why? When I got a retard flow like Cheddar Bob
    I’m only 17, bitch I got plenty of time
    Shouts to CNR, she’s a fuckin dime (Woah!)
    Man I wouldn’t touch that ugly bitch with a pole
    She looks like Saddam Hussein fresh from his hole.
    Haha… wow this verse is a waste
    Now let me get on the dude that calls himself based
    Dreezy, you call yourself a pretty bitch
    Comparing yourself to girls? Boy slit your wrist.
    That really wasn’t a dis, but I just don’t understand
    How you can call yourself a bitch and still be a man
    Don’t be offended this is just a suggestion
    Come back to rap and continue succession
    I know I’m throwing shots, but please don’t cry
    I just murdered YNR and I didn’t even try
    Let me end this verse before it’s too late
    Fuck ‘em all, bitch I’m too great
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    Economy (Preview)(December 12, 2009)
    My dudes use to ride around in brand new whips
    And they never gave a shit about politics
    Then Bush stepped in office and fucked up shit
    Now we gotta rely on Barack to make the fix
    Struggling to pay bills and keep a house
    Money's real tight when you come from the South
    Tryna figure out what you wanna be
    But you can't do shit in this economy
    Since the recession the money been tight
    It doesn't matter if you're black or white
    We need someone to get us out of this hole
    That requires everyone to play their role
    Working a nine to five on minimum wage
    Government takes out 200, leaving you in a rage
    We all have to do what we can
    Step one take the troops out of Afghanistan
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------
    Another 16 Bars(December 9, 2009)
    I thought of this verse while sitting in a bus seat
    My lyrics got your girl swept off her feet
    All I know is victory, what the fuck is defeat
    Her touch is the lyrics and her heart is the beat
    I bring the heat, yeah I spit that flame
    Give me the crown, I'm the king of the game
    I write in my head like I tattoo my brain
    Too many thoughts, I might bust a vein
    White T, gym shorts, and some fresh forces
    I'm eating these rappers, all three courses
    Watched by the cops like all red Porsches
    I spit fire, I could light torches
    Your girl dig my swag, she say I'm so lyrical
    I can lend you bars, I got infinite material
    I speak the truth, my lyrics so serious
    You think you can beat me, you must be delirious
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------
    My First 16(August 19, 2009)
    Money come fast like a runner
    I make hits, you just a one hit wonder
    I flow like lightning, and yes I bring the thunder
    And if you touch my money you're goin' six feet under...
    The ground or the road
    When I jump on a track, I go beast mode
    Drink a lot of syrup, so my flow kinda slowed
    Like a slug or a snail
    You pussies can't see me like you fuckin' read braille
    Flow retarded like a dog chasin' his tail
    You pussies faker than a fairy tale
    I succeed, everybody else fail
    Yall So stupid, and I'm so Yale...
    Yea, I'm so smart
    Got precision aim at your bulls eye like a dart
    And that dart sharper than the hair on Bart
    Yea bitch I'm the shit, everybody else a fart
    And I've been running this game since Mario Kart
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------
    My Second 16(August 19, 2009)
    As soon as I walked through the door
    Shawty knew she would get ate to the core
    Like an apple...
    I drink her fluids like Snapple
    She ride my dick like a saddle
    Then she milk me like cattle
    I can murder anybody in a fuckin battle
    I got them boys scared, and yea I make 'em rattle
    I get straight to the next line, no huddle
    My flow so insane, its not suttle
    Me and your girl, we can just cuddle
    Or maybe I can smash and get her wetter than a puddle
    Or should I say rain
    I'm a head hunter so you know I love brain
    I fuck your girl so hard, she'll have to walk wit a cane
    Haha, bitch I'm so insane
    I'm the best in the game
    Call me Mr. Hall of Fame

  • #2
    Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

    Reserved

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    • #3
      Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

      About time, I was waiting to let you know that you shouldn't of created your thread at 10:38 because it brought me to it when I didn't want to go to it.
      I like the color contrasts


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      • #4
        Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

        Originally posted by Enigma
        About time, I was waiting to let you know that you shouldn't of created your thread at 10:38 because it brought me to it when I didn't want to go to it.
        What do you mean?

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        • #5
          Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

          Update!!! I added a new verse to the original post. "Another 16 Bars" (December 9, 2009)

          Check it out. And leave feedback, please.

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          • #6
            Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

            Nice. I like the Skim and Steezy diss.
            Cash Flow Ent

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            • #7
              Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

              Originally posted by Lil' Jay
              Nice. I like the Skim and Steezy diss.
              lol thats a week old. I need feedback on my new one that I thought of on the bus... no writing until I got on here

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              • #8
                Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

                Originally posted by Artille
                Originally posted by Lil' Jay
                Nice. I like the Skim and Steezy diss.
                lol thats a week old. I need feedback on my new one that I thought of on the bus... no writing until I got on here
                The new one is good. Sorry, I didn't read it.
                Cash Flow Ent

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                • #9
                  Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

                  For those too lazy to go to the original post like my dude Lil Jay here is my newest work

                  Another 16 Bars(December 9, 2009)
                  I thought of this verse while sitting in a bus seat
                  My lyrics got your girl swept off her feet
                  All I know is victory, what the fuck is defeat
                  Her touch is the lyrics and her heart is the beat
                  I bring the heat, yeah I spit that flame
                  Give me the crown, I'm the king of the game
                  I write in my head like I tattoo my brain
                  Too many thoughts, I might bust a vein
                  White T, gym shorts, and some fresh forces
                  I'm eating these rappers, all three courses
                  Watched by the cops like all red Porsches
                  I spit fire, I could light torches
                  Don't call me Jrock, but I'm oh so lyrical
                  I can lend you bars, infinite material
                  I speak the truth, my lyrics so serious
                  You think you can beat me, you must be delirious

                  FEEDBACK...

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                  • #10
                    Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

                    Originally posted by Artille
                    For those too lazy to go to the original post like my dude Lil Jay here is my newest work

                    Another 16 Bars(December 9, 2009)
                    I thought of this verse while sitting in a bus seat
                    My lyrics got your girl swept off her feet
                    All I know is victory, what the fuck is defeat
                    Her touch is the lyrics and her heart is the beat
                    I bring the heat, yeah I spit that flame
                    Give me the crown, I'm the king of the game
                    I write in my head like I tattoo my brain
                    Too many thoughts, I might bust a vein
                    White T, gym shorts, and some fresh forces
                    I'm eating these rappers, all three courses
                    Watched by the cops like all red Porsches
                    I spit fire, I could light torches
                    Don't call me Jrock, but I'm oh so lyrical
                    I can lend you bars, infinite material
                    I speak the truth, my lyrics so serious
                    You think you can beat me, you must be delirious

                    FEEDBACK...
                    This is nice should be the first thing you record

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                    • #11
                      Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

                      Originally posted by cody
                      This is nice should be the first thing you record
                      Thank you for the feedback.

                      And actually, I was saying to myself earlier "Christmas needs to hurry up so I can record this shit!!!" I'm feeling really good today. Created it on the bus on the way home. I was talking to myself and shit, repeating the lyrics to try to build off it. Other people were like "Why are you talking to yourself?" haha but it's ok.

                      Please guys more feedback. I don't like to be conceited and talk about myself, but I have to say this is by far my best work.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Artille Official Thread [Written Only]

                        Originally posted by Artille
                        For those too lazy to go to the original post like my dude Lil Jay here is my newest work

                        Another 16 Bars(December 9, 2009)
                        I thought of this verse while sitting in a bus seat
                        My lyrics got your girl swept off her feet
                        All I know is victory, what the fuck is defeat
                        Her touch is the lyrics and her heart is the beat
                        I bring the heat, yeah I spit that flame
                        Give me the crown, I'm the king of the game
                        I write in my head like I tattoo my brain
                        Too many thoughts, I might bust a vein
                        White T, gym shorts, and some fresh forces
                        I'm eating these rappers, all three courses
                        Watched by the cops like all red Porsches
                        I spit fire, I could light torches
                        Don't call me Jrock, but I'm oh so lyrical
                        I can lend you bars, infinite material
                        I speak the truth, my lyrics so serious
                        You think you can beat me, you must be delirious

                        FEEDBACK...
                        Great shit bro.




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