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"how did I make it here" section flow is so perfectly simple, and the hook isn't instant but burrows in, props.
Two small critiques though chief - Video takes a little long to get going for a new artist, I confess I skipped in after about 45 seconds because I was there for the music. That said you can tell you were enjoying putting production values into it and wanted to show it off haha. I've over-indulged myself like that at times so I get it, no hate. Also just on the Autotune front, because you have a mellow, laid back voice (which really suits the song btw), you could crank the Retune knob up to about 11 and it'd hit perfect. Maybe I'm being pedantic but there's a few little artificial 'vocal wobbles' even though your delivery is fine, and 90% of the time that's the Retune being set too low.
All of that said my dude, left you a like and hope you drop more, an ear for flow can't always be taught and you have that naturally.
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This pretty good i like your flow on the beat but i feel theres some moments where the delivery gets a bit weak and ur voice wobbles, i think some of the backing layers are a bit too loud which adds to this, could try turning up the retune on the backing vocals and letting them sit a tad quieter, should 'even out' your main vocals.
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