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  • #49
    Re: #Official Poetry Thread

    This is a true story.
    I have to tweak it up a bit because I want to respect the Family's privacy.
    I still don't know the actual story behind, and "family gang" is this term we use...

    "Nothing really matters until something worth is gone"
    And you don't even care until shit hits home
    All the stress brings tears
    Mom and Dad don't care
    They just want her to finish school because they didn't make it there
    January 23, 2009
    I met this girl named *blank* a close friend of mine
    She was quiet, she only spoke if you spoke first
    And she didn't pay much attention unless you got on her nerves
    You would have never known it, but she was in this gang
    You see these weird little gangs, the ones that play those games?
    February 17, 2009
    She was standing by a tree
    That's what "they" said to me
    This big SUV it was silver or blue
    It ran her over, crushed her bones, ran over her head too
    Nobody knew who it was
    They just knew it was a gang
    But eventually they found out it was her "family" gang

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    • #50
      Re: #Official Poetry Thread

      Originally posted by BonitaRoses
      This is a true story.
      I have to tweak it up a bit because I want to respect the Family's privacy.
      I still don't know the actual story behind, and "family gang" is this term we use...

      "Nothing really matters until something worth is gone"
      And you don't even care until shit hits home
      All the stress brings tears
      Mom and Dad don't care
      They just want her to finish school because they didn't make it there
      January 23, 2009
      I met this girl named *blank* a close friend of mine
      She was quiet, she only spoke if you spoke first
      And she didn't pay much attention unless you got on her nerves
      You would have never known it, but she was in this gang
      You see these weird little gangs, the ones that play those games?
      February 17, 2009
      She was standing by a tree
      That's what "they" said to me
      This big SUV it was silver or blue
      It ran her over, crushed her bones, ran over her head too
      Nobody knew who it was
      They just knew it was a gang
      But eventually they found out it was her "family" gang

      Niceeeee Rose That Poem Is Really Nice I Liked The Metaphors


      Comment


      • #51
        Re: #Official Poetry Thread

        Originally posted by BonitaRoses
        This is a true story.
        I have to tweak it up a bit because I want to respect the Family's privacy.
        I still don't know the actual story behind, and "family gang" is this term we use...

        "Nothing really matters until something worth is gone"
        And you don't even care until shit hits home
        All the stress brings tears
        Mom and Dad don't care
        They just want her to finish school because they didn't make it there
        January 23, 2009
        I met this girl named *blank* a close friend of mine
        She was quiet, she only spoke if you spoke first
        And she didn't pay much attention unless you got on her nerves
        You would have never known it, but she was in this gang
        You see these weird little gangs, the ones that play those games?
        February 17, 2009
        She was standing by a tree
        That's what "they" said to me
        This big SUV it was silver or blue
        It ran her over, crushed her bones, ran over her head too
        Nobody knew who it was
        They just knew it was a gang
        But eventually they found out it was her "family" gang
        damm..dats a good deep story and good details..and sorry for da lost again
        "Full white top cup full of codeine mix
        Still eat a couple rappers for my protein bitch
        I'm on my so mean shit!
        And you don't know me bitch
        I do it for those who did it before me bitch
        My goon is 'gon ride even with a slow leak bitch
        And if we gettin chicken you get NO piece bitchh"

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        • #52
          Re: #Official Poetry Thread

          Originally posted by Young Money!24
          Originally posted by BonitaRoses
          This is a true story.
          I have to tweak it up a bit because I want to respect the Family's privacy.
          I still don't know the actual story behind, and "family gang" is this term we use...

          "Nothing really matters until something worth is gone"
          And you don't even care until shit hits home
          All the stress brings tears
          Mom and Dad don't care
          They just want her to finish school because they didn't make it there
          January 23, 2009
          I met this girl named *blank* a close friend of mine
          She was quiet, she only spoke if you spoke first
          And she didn't pay much attention unless you got on her nerves
          You would have never known it, but she was in this gang
          You see these weird little gangs, the ones that play those games?
          February 17, 2009
          She was standing by a tree
          That's what "they" said to me
          This big SUV it was silver or blue
          It ran her over, crushed her bones, ran over her head too
          Nobody knew who it was
          They just knew it was a gang
          But eventually they found out it was her "family" gang
          damm..dats a good deep story and good details..and sorry for da lost again
          Thank you so much

          Originally posted by YoungTune.
          Originally posted by BonitaRoses
          This is a true story.
          I have to tweak it up a bit because I want to respect the Family's privacy.
          I still don't know the actual story behind, and "family gang" is this term we use...

          "Nothing really matters until something worth is gone"
          And you don't even care until shit hits home
          All the stress brings tears
          Mom and Dad don't care
          They just want her to finish school because they didn't make it there
          January 23, 2009
          I met this girl named *blank* a close friend of mine
          She was quiet, she only spoke if you spoke first
          And she didn't pay much attention unless you got on her nerves
          You would have never known it, but she was in this gang
          You see these weird little gangs, the ones that play those games?
          February 17, 2009
          She was standing by a tree
          That's what "they" said to me
          This big SUV it was silver or blue
          It ran her over, crushed her bones, ran over her head too
          Nobody knew who it was
          They just knew it was a gang
          But eventually they found out it was her "family" gang

          Niceeeee Rose That Poem Is Really Nice I Liked The Metaphors
          Thank you so much

          Comment


          • #53
            Re: #Official Poetry Thread

            This is a writing I just started on my cell while helpin cousin on bathroom..Just talkin about da people I talks to alot and are cool..My "HQ Fam"

            if ur name is not mentioned PLZZZZZ dont get offended.PLZ..I didnt spend much time on it..maybe an hour.so i just typed wut came out first.but like i said.if u feel that i forgot you..it was not in purpose.but da people i do mention..I hope u enjoy and i tried.lol..i had fun and was laughin a bit while typin this.Cause ya are funny!!!

            Lilwaynehq,Where da people be so cool
            We buggin we be laughin,Chillin and relaxing
            Laughing hard as fuck,Wen we see somebody failing
            Like Tune,But he's cool and he's my dude
            Gypsystardork,s]Spanish lookin chick,But she black
            don't talk down on SnL,Cause she aint affraid to attack u bitches
            And I got ur back,So star,Which bitch we gon attack?
            Or should we stay cool and calm like Franknstein?
            Bonitaroses lives in Cali I'm just kiddin lives in Miami
            Dan we need a red rose smiley!
            Lovalle reppin Jersey,she be funny she be crazy
            Tanx to her,I got a book of excuses
            Jammy Jamerson he wildlin with his girlfriend
            Shoutout to blooded and 12345678987654321.lmao
            Msz Ynr,Michale Jackson Lloyd fan
            She dont take shit from anybody,Ya better get a toilet
            But she sweet as cotton candy,Nowww I kno why I got a dam cavity
            Skimdude dats my dude but he got banned he was da man
            God damm Danny,I wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't for you
            Thank you dude!.Lilwayne HQ is my homepage,And my point is...That yall are great


            Hope yall like it.I had fun writing this
            "Full white top cup full of codeine mix
            Still eat a couple rappers for my protein bitch
            I'm on my so mean shit!
            And you don't know me bitch
            I do it for those who did it before me bitch
            My goon is 'gon ride even with a slow leak bitch
            And if we gettin chicken you get NO piece bitchh"

            Comment


            • #54
              Re: #Official Poetry Thread

              Originally posted by Young Money!24
              This is a writing I just started on my cell while helpin cousin on bathroom..Just talkin about da people I talks to alot and are cool..My "HQ Fam"

              if ur name is not mentioned PLZZZZZ dont get offended.PLZ..I didnt spend much time on it..maybe an hour.so i just typed wut came out first.but like i said.if u feel that i forgot you..it was not in purpose.but da people i do mention..I hope u enjoy and i tried.lol..i had fun and was laughin a bit while typin this.Cause ya are funny!!!

              Lilwaynehq,Where da people be so cool
              We buggin we be laughin,Chillin and relaxing
              Laughing hard as fuck,Wen we see somebody failing
              Like Tune,But he's cool and he's my dude
              Gypsystardork,s]Spanish lookin chick,But she black
              don't talk down on SnL,Cause she aint affraid to attack u bitches
              And I got ur back,So star,Which bitch we gon attack?
              Or should we stay cool and calm like Franknstein?
              Bonitaroses lives in Cali I'm just kiddin lives in Miami
              Dan we need a red rose smiley!
              Lovalle reppin Jersey,she be funny she be crazy
              Tanx to her,I got a book of excuses
              Jammy Jamerson he wildlin with his girlfriend
              Shoutout to blooded and 123456789987654321.lmao
              Msz Ynr,Michale Jackson Lloyd fan
              She dont take shit from anybody,Ya better get a toilet
              But she sweet as cotton candy,Nowww I kno why I got a dam cavity
              Skimdude dats my dude but he banned he was da man
              God damm Danny,I wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't for you
              Thank you dude!.Lilwayne HQ is my homepage,And my point is...That yall are great


              Hope yall like it.I had fun writing this
              This is soooo sweeeeeeeet And so nice. Thank you Goldfish love ya with your crazy self!!

              Comment


              • #55
                Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                Originally posted by Young Money!24
                This is a writing I just started on my cell while helpin cousin on bathroom..Just talkin about da people I talks to alot and are cool..My "HQ Fam"

                if ur name is not mentioned PLZZZZZ dont get offended.PLZ..I didnt spend much time on it..maybe an hour.so i just typed wut came out first.but like i said.if u feel that i forgot you..it was not in purpose.but da people i do mention..I hope u enjoy and i tried.lol..i had fun and was laughin a bit while typin this.Cause ya are funny!!!

                Lilwaynehq,Where da people be so cool
                We buggin we be laughin,Chillin and relaxing
                Laughing hard as fuck,Wen we see somebody failing
                Like Tune,But he's cool and he's my dude
                Gypsystardork,s]Spanish lookin chick,But she black
                don't talk down on SnL,Cause she aint affraid to attack u bitches
                And I got ur back,So star,Which bitch we gon attack?
                Or should we stay cool and calm like Franknstein?
                Bonitaroses lives in Cali I'm just kiddin lives in Miami
                Dan we need a red rose smiley!
                Lovalle reppin Jersey,she be funny she be crazy
                Tanx to her,I got a book of excuses
                Jammy Jamerson he wildlin with his girlfriend
                Shoutout to blooded and 123456789987654321.lmao
                Msz Ynr,Michale Jackson Lloyd fan
                She dont take shit from anybody,Ya better get a toilet
                But she sweet as cotton candy,Nowww I kno why I got a dam cavity
                Skimdude dats my dude but he got banned he was da man
                God damm Danny,I wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't for you
                Thank you dude!.Lilwayne HQ is my homepage,And my point is...That yall are great


                Hope yall like it.I had fun writing this
                Lol It was pretty funny Good job

                "ashdgakg adwudgashdga askjdh how to love" — lil wayne

                Comment


                • #56
                  Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                  Originally posted by Young Money!24
                  This is a writing I just started on my cell while helpin cousin on bathroom..Just talkin about da people I talks to alot and are cool..My "HQ Fam"

                  if ur name is not mentioned PLZZZZZ dont get offended.PLZ..I didnt spend much time on it..maybe an hour.so i just typed wut came out first.but like i said.if u feel that i forgot you..it was not in purpose.but da people i do mention..I hope u enjoy and i tried.lol..i had fun and was laughin a bit while typin this.Cause ya are funny!!!

                  Lilwaynehq,Where da people be so cool
                  We buggin we be laughin,Chillin and relaxing
                  Laughing hard as fuck,Wen we see somebody failing
                  Like Tune,But he's cool and he's my dude

                  Gypsystardork,s]Spanish lookin chick,But she black
                  don't talk down on SnL,Cause she aint affraid to attack u bitches
                  And I got ur back,So star,Which bitch we gon attack?
                  Or should we stay cool and calm like Franknstein?
                  Bonitaroses lives in Cali I'm just kiddin lives in Miami
                  Dan we need a red rose smiley!
                  Lovalle reppin Jersey,she be funny she be crazy
                  Tanx to her,I got a book of excuses
                  Jammy Jamerson he wildlin with his girlfriend
                  Shoutout to blooded and 12345678987654321.lmao
                  Msz Ynr,Michale Jackson Lloyd fan
                  She dont take shit from anybody,Ya better get a toilet
                  But she sweet as cotton candy,Nowww I kno why I got a dam cavity
                  Skimdude dats my dude but he got banned he was da man
                  God damm Danny,I wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't for you
                  Thank you dude!.Lilwayne HQ is my homepage,And my point is...That yall are great


                  Hope yall like it.I had fun writing this

                  You Ma Nigga

                  Much Love! (pause)


                  Comment


                  • #57
                    Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                    Originally posted by Young Money!24
                    This is a writing I just started on my cell while helpin cousin on bathroom..Just talkin about da people I talks to alot and are cool..My "HQ Fam"

                    if ur name is not mentioned PLZZZZZ dont get offended.PLZ..I didnt spend much time on it..maybe an hour.so i just typed wut came out first.but like i said.if u feel that i forgot you..it was not in purpose.but da people i do mention..I hope u enjoy and i tried.lol..i had fun and was laughin a bit while typin this.Cause ya are funny!!!

                    Lilwaynehq,Where da people be so cool
                    We buggin we be laughin,Chillin and relaxing
                    Laughing hard as fuck,Wen we see somebody failing
                    Like Tune,But he's cool and he's my dude
                    Gypsystardork,s]Spanish lookin chick,But she black
                    don't talk down on SnL,Cause she aint affraid to attack u bitches
                    And I got ur back,So star,Which bitch we gon attack?
                    Or should we stay cool and calm like Franknstein?
                    Bonitaroses lives in Cali I'm just kiddin lives in Miami
                    Dan we need a red rose smiley!
                    Lovalle reppin Jersey,she be funny she be crazy
                    Tanx to her,I got a book of excuses
                    Jammy Jamerson he wildlin with his girlfriend
                    Shoutout to blooded and 12345678987654321.lmao
                    Msz Ynr,Michale Jackson Lloyd fan
                    She dont take shit from anybody,Ya better get a toilet
                    But she sweet as cotton candy,Nowww I kno why I got a dam cavity
                    Skimdude dats my dude but he got banned he was da man
                    God damm Danny,I wouldn't be writing this if it wasn't for you
                    Thank you dude!.Lilwayne HQ is my homepage,And my point is...That yall are great


                    Hope yall like it.I had fun writing this
                    Awww YM
                    http://www.iamshanell.com
                    LOG ON AND GET INTO IT!!!!

                    Comment


                    • #58
                      Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                      Tanx you Rose,Lovalle,Tune,and Star and Aamira Mucho Love! lol...i told u i can type spanish
                      "Full white top cup full of codeine mix
                      Still eat a couple rappers for my protein bitch
                      I'm on my so mean shit!
                      And you don't know me bitch
                      I do it for those who did it before me bitch
                      My goon is 'gon ride even with a slow leak bitch
                      And if we gettin chicken you get NO piece bitchh"

                      Comment


                      • #59
                        Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                        Who lied and said I was nice?
                        I am a seedling made from Hell's Kitchen.

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                        • #60
                          Re: #Official Poetry Thread

                          Originally posted by MszYNR
                          Who lied and said I was nice?
                          I am a seedling made from Hell's Kitchen.

                          lmaoo...i didnt say that...i said Sweet
                          "Full white top cup full of codeine mix
                          Still eat a couple rappers for my protein bitch
                          I'm on my so mean shit!
                          And you don't know me bitch
                          I do it for those who did it before me bitch
                          My goon is 'gon ride even with a slow leak bitch
                          And if we gettin chicken you get NO piece bitchh"

                          Comment

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