#Official Poetry Thread

[Guest]

Ight, IDK how well this is gonna go over but, bliss gamme his blessin on dis Topic so have fun & please, no negative bullshit please.

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

Bitter Sweet Revenge

When I look into the mirror, I see the scars that you gave me.
From da scratches on my face to the knife wound on my arm looks sort of like you raped me.
U make me neva wanna love again.
After u, its jus one night stands and living in sin.
I would neva hit a woman but, U were close 2 bein da 1st.
U would tell me shut da fuck up and say I know dat didnt hurt.
U threatened me wit ur brothers so I took care of dat.
I gave his pussy ass a red hat when I beat his ass wit dat bat.
U might think I'm sadistic but, u were the one who bought him the gun.
And U know how I am and how I would never run.
I gave it all up 4 u and U took wat I had and threw it away.
& 2 bad so sad was all u had 2 say.
Now u tryna call me cuz U cant pay ur rent?
& U think bribing me wit head will get u a god damn cent?
I can now see da scars u gave me aren't dat bad.
Cuz now I can sit back and laff thinkin dat u now have a sugar dad.
He pimpin ur ass out and U tryna call me 4 advice.
But in da words of Lil Wayne, I told u over and over again, "Fuck You, Get Alife"

[GypsyStar]

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"Cast a spell" by me

Sometimes I wish I could be one of those witches in fairy tales,
I could get in your mind just by casting a spell.
Get into that place you thought you knew so well,
Trapping you forever in your own personal hell.

Oh, how I would just love torturing you,
In the one place you can't escape me.
I would chase you forever, making your dreams nightmares.
You'd never want to close your eyes again.
You'd never want to see my face again,
Or hear my voice again.

But of course I'm going to make you relive me again.

You didn't stop when I wanted you to.
So why should I spare my revenge on you?
You tortured me, I'm gonna torture you
Did whatever you wanted to me,
why shouldn't I do the same to you?

My hellish memories, feelings untrue
Lies upon lies spilled from you.
Devilish desires, revenge appeals
Restless spirit, my destiny unfulfilled.
Your existence irks me, I know what ill do,
Just close my eyes and pay a visit to you.

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

"Cast a spell"

Sometimes I wish I could be one of those witches in fairy tales,
I could get in your mind just by casting a spell.
Get into that place you thought you knew so well,
Trapping you forever in your own personal hell.

Oh, how I would just love torturing you,
In the one place you can't escape me.
I would chase you forever, making your dreams nightmares.
You'd never want to close your eyes again.
You'd never want to see my face again,
Or hear my voice again.

But of course I'm going to make you relive me again.

You didn't stop when I wanted you to.
So why should I spare my revenge on you?
You tortured me, I'm gonna torture you
Did whatever you wanted to me,
why shouldn't I do the same to you?

My hellish memories, feelings untrue
Lies upon lies spilled from you.
Devilish desires, revenge appeals
Restless spirit, my destiny unfulfilled.
Your existence irks me, I know what ill do,
Just close my eyes and pay a visit to you.

Nice sis. Deep and dark.

[GypsyStar]

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Thank ya.

[CHRISOUTH]

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Jazz melodies run rampid through the hallway.
I space out to the sound of the low bass.
The gold taste of the Axe, and the trumpet.
To the feel of the snare while the percussionist is drummin.
I walk with a long stride to the dumb end.
As I'm strolling I think about the trombone hummin.
The methods of the madness while the vocalist dumpin.
Man before you know it the pianist come in.
The adolescent's duck in.
The crowd start jumpin.
The swaying, and the moving you would think they drinking something.
I pass tons of lockers maybe 4 or 5 fountains.
After I'm done climbing this musical mountain. Thats when I stop counting.
The band bounces while they chopping, and the bar tender shouts out.
Last call you jive cats the bands heading towards town.

[Stryder]

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Can i post my favourite poem or has to be made by myself?

[Safe_Kid]

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Can i post my favourite poem or has to be made by myself?

Post any thing related to poetry. Doesn't have to be yours.

[Artille]

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Correct me if I'm wrong (which I'm not) but

Rap is a form of poetry. So basically, the whole studio is just one big place for poetry. So could I write raps in here?

[YoungFire420]

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Correct me if I'm wrong (which I'm not) but

Rap is a form of poetry. So basically, the whole studio is just one big place for poetry. So could I write raps in here?

100% right.

[JrockHQ]

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Correct me if I'm wrong (which I'm not) but

Rap is a form of poetry. So basically, the whole studio is just one big place for poetry. So could I write raps in here?

Lmao i thought you made this topic, but when i read the title i thought the exact same thing but didn't wanna start any trouble

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

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Correct me if I'm wrong (which I'm not) but

Rap is a form of poetry. So basically, the whole studio is just one big place for poetry. So could I write raps in here?

Correct you could write raps in here. But no the studio could even be for rock songs or something if someone made that sort of music.

But this thread is good as poetry isn't like rap, it doesn't fit into bars or rhyme, it can be more free form and there are many different ways to write poetry