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  • #13
    Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

    take the dj tags out, it ruined it

    but this wayyyy better than the first
    still funny voice

    YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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    • #14
      Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

      Originally posted by Jamerson View Post
      flow - was good just a few bars a little off, maybe they were too short or too long.. but i didnt affect it that much
      lyrics - good
      overall - 4/5 good job Young Fire
      Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
      I like this version alot better. Great emotion too.

      Flow: There's a few drop offs, like maybe youre running out of breath. Comes from being a smoker though probably. I have the same problem sometime.
      what part of the song yall talkin bout,????? becuz i didnt hear any parts where he was off.

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      • #15
        Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

        Theres no DJ tags. Its called producers tags on the song.



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        • #16
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          Originally posted by THP850 View Post
          Theres no DJ tags. Its called producers tags on the song.
          take them off so it sounds decent

          YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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          • #17
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            Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
            take them off so it sounds decent
            I cant take them out smh? And it sounds fine with them. Dont worry about it.



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            • #18
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              Originally posted by THP850 View Post
              I cant take them out smh? And it sounds fine with them. Dont worry about it.
              thats fucked up, u cant take them.

              YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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              • #19
                Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                I didnt buy the beat, therefore it still has tags.



                But anymore feedback yall?



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                • #20
                  Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                  Props, man.

                  Flow - Real good, a few drop offs, but nothing really noticeable.

                  Lyrics - Real shit, you really put emotion in it, and spoke from the heart.

                  Other - I looove that chorus, it really makes the song stand out; I listened to this song like 4 times in a row, lol.

                  Overall- 4.9/5


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                  • #21
                    Re: Young Fire - Giving Up

                    Appreciate that man! Thanks, thanks, thanks!



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                    • #22
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                      You almost sound like a pro! Damn I really felt this!

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                      • #23
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                        already gave some feedback but damn dawg, its so raw i love it. seriously my favorite song right now. i love the emotion and your voice goes so good with the beat. its a perfect song
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                        • #24
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                          Originally posted by snowman99 View Post
                          already gave some feedback but damn dawg, its so raw i love it. seriously my favorite song right now. i love the emotion and your voice goes so good with the beat. its a perfect song
                          Thanks man!!! Glad you do like it.



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