Artille - Just Livin Life (Produced by Evelution)

[Artille]

I don't see how anyone likes that "I'm ballin on these hoes, but I suck at basketball" line. I thought it was the weakest in the entire song lol.

Thanks for the feed guys. Already working on more music.

[ProBitaz.]

I've always liked your songs. You got good flow and lyrics, but as you said yourself, your delivery is really lacking. I'd rather hear a song where you overdo the delivery, just so you can get used to it.

[Young Mula Fan]

is that you in ur pic?

[Artille]

is that you in ur pic?

I thought that was pretty obvious... but yes.

[THA GR8 M8]

Flow - Flow was cool... But your laid back delivery and lack of emotion kinda made the track boring, almost to the point where it wasn't enjoyable..
Lyrics - Really dope. I fuck with the lyrics. Multies seem to flow through smoothly. Dopeness.
Other - Hook was below average. Vocal mastering could be a bit crispier. Beat was cool.
Overall - 3.5/5. Good comeback track.

[Explicit]

Aight, the flow and lyrics are pretty good and make a good song, but the thing that brings the value of the song down is your delivery. You sound really bored-mono-tone, if you work hard and improve on that then you will be making gold songs man! The way I fixed my mono-tone was when laying vocals I pretend that I'm performing infront of a crowd, so my energy is up and such, and like sad/deep songs like this, record them when your in a really dark time because the emotion is really strong through the vocals! Overall this song is pretty good man!

[cGrumm]

I didnt like the hook, the idea was good but it wasnt executed perfectly. I like how you came relaxed on this, but your vocals were missing something that I cant exactly pinpoint lol. The lyrics were good. The flow was what made the song for me personally. Overall it was a good put together song. I think just work on the hook and this would be perfect.
3.5/5