#Official Poetry Thread

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

Like y is it dat er thread I make turns into a war zone. My dick in a box thread (but bliss deleted da argument) my fashion thread, and dis ones bout 2 turn into one. ima start shuttin da fuck up when I have ideas.

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

I run towards my goals but, they seem to get farther.
So I run faster & faster with a backpack full of bricks just to make it harder.
I might be getting tired but, at least I'm getting stronger.
I'm also building up my stamina so I can last a little bit longer.
No Red Bull for me, just water & some bread.
The thing that drives me are the thoughts in my head.
The anger, the joy, the pain, and the glory.
But sometimes as I'm running, it starts to get boring.
I want to let it all go and just lie on the ground.
Curl up in a little ball & ignore all sound.
But I know doing that will just make you happy.
Make you point & poke & & laugh at me.
So I stay running or thats what it feels like.
When I got my headphones in my ear & I'm riding on my bike.

[GypsyStar]

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I run towards my goals but, they seem to get farther.
So I run faster & faster with a backpack full of bricks just to make it harder.
I might be getting tired but, at least I'm getting stronger.
I'm also building up my stamina so I can last a little bit longer.
No Red Bull for me, just water & some bread.
The thing that drives me are the thoughts in my head.
The anger, the joy, the pain, and the glory.
But sometimes as I'm running, it starts to get boring.
I want to let it all go and just lie on the ground.
Curl up in a little ball & ignore all sound.
But I know doing that will just make you happy.
Make you point & poke & & laugh at me.
So I stay running or thats what it feels like.
When I got my headphones in my ear & I'm riding on my bike.

Deep

[YoungFire420]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

I speak the righter (writer) words, but they turning out wronger
As you wait longer, the weaker get stronger
And the poorer get richest
And the good girls turn to bitches
The world, isnt what is viewable by your eyes
Promises are constantly broken, truths turn to lies
Boys turn to guys, but become so damn deceitful
At the top already, but this aint the peak fool

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

I speak the righter (writer) words, but they turning out wronger
As you wait longer, the weaker get stronger
And the poorer get richest
And the good girls turn to bitches
The world, isnt what is viewable by your eyes
Promises are constantly broken, truths turn to lies
Boys turn to guys, but become so damn deceitful
At the top already, but this aint the peak fool

DEEP.

[YoungFire420]

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'preciate that!

[YoungMoneyEnt]

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It's what everyone pursue's, yet only some achieve.
It will make you feel important, something to believe.
It can come from something so simple yet sophisticated.
And I feel it at it's peak when my mind it faded.
Some think its love but you just can't tackle it.
What I'm talking about is happiness.

[MissDrizzy]

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I DID NOT write this. My friend, Monique wrote it. It`s about being unborn. ( i.e; abortion )


Laughs never laughed, dreams never dreamt.
Jokes never told, promises never kept.
Hearts never beat, smiles never smiled.
Songs never sung, imaginations never wild.

Friends never made, gifts never discovered.
Minds never tainted, mysteries never uncovered.
Words never written, words never spoken.
Pain never felt, spirits never broken.

Joy never rejoiced, lights never shine.
The children unborn, they were given no time.
Goals never met, potential never reached.
Brilliance never found, love never preached.

Never to hear the clapping of their hands.
Never to see their tiny feet dance.
Never to witness the evils of the world.
Opportunity lost, no little boy, no girl.

No sorrow, distress, no bad, no good.
No victim of hatred, never to be misunderstood.
Never to be judged, mistreated, ridiculed.
Never called names, never to be made a fool.

So bittersweet.
A gift and a curse.
The unborn or those like us?
What do you think?
Who has it the worst?

o_O

Please tell her it's amazing
I love it.

"Cast a spell" by me

Sometimes I wish I could be one of those witches in fairy tales,
I could get in your mind just by casting a spell.
Get into that place you thought you knew so well,
Trapping you forever in your own personal hell.

Oh, how I would just love torturing you,
In the one place you can't escape me.
I would chase you forever, making your dreams nightmares.
You'd never want to close your eyes again.
You'd never want to see my face again,
Or hear my voice again.

But of course I'm going to make you relive me again.

You didn't stop when I wanted you to.
So why should I spare my revenge on you?
You tortured me, I'm gonna torture you
Did whatever you wanted to me,
why shouldn't I do the same to you?

My hellish memories, feelings untrue
Lies upon lies spilled from you.
Devilish desires, revenge appeals
Restless spirit, my destiny unfulfilled.
Your existence irks me, I know what ill do,
Just close my eyes and pay a visit to you.

I liked yours alot too! Felt very original
and different. (Good different lol)

Good job everyone, though

[MissDrizzy]

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Decided to add one myself
I call it:

"Death's Suicide"

Pressing the cold gun to my head, about to pull the trigger
The guilt of my mistakes will kill me if I don't, I figure
I contemplate my decision; to live... or to die?
Seeing it's not my choice to make, I begin to cry
I grip the weapon, returning it to it's place
To the 'X' on my temple; the target on my face
Shaking. Sweating. Scared. Crying.
Music blaring through earphone; "I feel like dying..."
How appropriate for this situation right here...
Glaring at myself in a cracked-up mirror
Pathetic. I can no longer stand my reflection
I take the safety off; my suicide protection
Guilt spreads, worsens like an infection
I love you, I swear, it's my last confession
Heart thumping wildly; sitting on my bed
Hands sweating; readying the deadly impact of lead
Eyes shut; screaming as the bullet shoots through my head
Then I stand up, realizing that... to myself, I'm allready dead.

I know I have bad use of semi-colons
& punctuation and that really bothers me

[Guest]

Re: #Official Poetry Thread

It's what everyone pursue's, yet only some achieve.
It will make you feel important, something to believe.
It can come from something so simple yet sophisticated.
And I feel it at it's peak when my mind it faded.
Some think its love but you just can't tackle it.
What I'm talking about is happiness.

Short and 2 da point, I like it YME

Decided to add one myself
I call it:

"Death's Suicide"

Pressing the cold gun to my head, about to pull the trigger
The guilt of my mistakes will kill me if I don't, I figure
I contemplate my decision; to live... or to die?
Seeing it's not my choice to make, I begin to cry
I grip the weapon, returning it to it's place
To the 'X' on my temple; the target on my face
Shaking. Sweating. Scared. Crying.
Music blaring through earphone; "I feel like dying..."
How appropriate for this situation right here...
Glaring at myself in a cracked-up mirror
Pathetic. I can no longer stand my reflection
I take the safety off; my suicide protection
Guilt spreads, worsens like an infection
I love you, I swear, it's my last confession
Heart thumping wildly; sitting on my bed
Hands sweating; readying the deadly impact of lead
Eyes shut; screaming as the bullet shoots through my head
Then I stand up, realizing that... to myself, I'm allready dead.

I know I have bad use of semi-colons
& punctuation and that really bothers me

MissDrizzy, Deep sweetie. I like it.

[GypsyStar]

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Ok we need to stop using the word deep lol.

[Guest]

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Ok we need to stop using the word deep lol.

LOL. Ight. How bout we jus give erone poetry snaps.