Official Written Tournament #1 [Complete]

[BBeasley]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Well I hate to win that way, but a win is a win, Thanks yungnruthless for the kind words man!

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

I'm updating the brackets shortly, but in the mean time you can view the matches for the WB Semi-Finals and LB Round 1 in the third post of this thread. I would like to thank YungNRuthless, Cody, and Nefu for coming through quickly with the judging.

Verses are due at 8PM (EST) on Saturday, June 26, 2010 for both bracket matches. Be sure to read the round details before submitting. I will send out a PM shortly letting all competitors know.

@YoungFire - I will do it tomorrow. I forgot since I was rushing and I'm about to go to bed.

EDIT: Also, be sure to check the newly updated Tournament Rules (link in first post and stickied in Battles section) to view the new Rematch rules and what happens in the even of a tie after a rematch.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [WB Semi-Finals/LB Round 1]

Young Fire next? Should be VERY interesting.


Thanks for the feedback though Judges.

[JrockHQ]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

since this is the first round for the LB do we follow the rules for the 1st round and do a 16 bar or continue with the 2nd round with a 24 bar?

Edit* Nvm just say the set up for the LB.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Well heres my 16 bars, but Jrock, i aint talkin' bout the website
I tell you im coming with that uppercut, then hit you in your left eye
See, you dont know what to expect, man you just a fool to me
And you already know J gunna get Rock'ed like some mufuckin' jewelery
And you about to get lit the fuck up, like a christmas tree
Its funny how this dude is more moody than motherfuckin' bitches be
And he think hes as rich as me, hah, well i got bankroll
I got big stacks, hes got like no fucking pesos
And this dude claims to rep NC like Petey.... Pablo
You can find him in Washington, Seattle; New Orleans, California; or anywhere his mind goes
But i really dont know why im dissing Jrock, i should be going at his ghost writer
Cause in real life Jrock has zero flow, no rhymes, and is a really fucking slow typer
Hahah this dude battling me? Thats basically just asking me to build his hurst
And to get respected around here bitch, imma have to give you the green light first
You aint got no stripes around here, you aint a tiger, you a lame cat
But check the links at the bottom, how the fuck do you explain that?

Original - My 16 Bars | Submitted Bars and Lyrics | RAYBK diss
First battle with those stolen lyrics - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...hill-over.html
Second battle with those stolen lyrics - http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=26&t=70253

Original - http://my16bars.com/content/18041/JUDGE-WINNER!!!.html
Battle where he stole the lines - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...66-battle.html

Since Shorttext isnt working. Decided to post my verse. That doesnt mean every other competitor has to post their verse. Posting mine so yall can see it, mostly the bottom part though. Holla at ya boy.

[blownoffkush]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

damn jrock got owned lmao

[JrockHQ]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

well heres my 16 bars, but jrock, i aint talkin' bout the website
i tell you im coming with that uppercut, then hit you in your left eye
see, you dont know what to expect, man you just a fool to me
and you already know j gunna get rock'ed like some mufuckin' jewelery
and you about to get lit the fuck up, like a christmas tree
its funny how this dude is more moody than motherfuckin' bitches be
and he think hes as rich as me, hah, well i got bankroll
i got big stacks, hes got like no fucking pesos
and this dude claims to rep nc like petey.... Pablo
you can find him in washington, seattle; new orleans, california; or anywhere his mind goes
but i really dont know why im dissing jrock, i should be going at his ghost writer
cause in real life jrock has zero flow, no rhymes, and is a really fucking slow typer
hahah this dude battling me? Thats basically just asking me to build his hurst
and to get respected around here bitch, imma have to give you the green light first
you aint got no stripes around here, you aint a tiger, you a lame cat
but check the links at the bottom, how the fuck do you explain that?

original - my 16 bars | submitted bars and lyrics | raybk diss
first battle with those stolen lyrics - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...hill-over.html
second battle with those stolen lyrics - http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=26&t=70253

original - http://my16bars.com/content/18041/judge-winner!!!.html
battle where he stole the lines - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...66-battle.html

since shorttext isnt working. Decided to post my verse. That doesnt mean every other competitor has to post their verse. Posting mine so yall can see it, mostly the bottom part though. Holla at ya boy.

Lol might as well post my verse.

YoungFire get the extinguisher because it's time to put you out
your skills are limited, you rap as if your infected with syphilis
You mumble your words, overall your MC vocabulary is absurd
your delivery is the type is to give swine flu to birds
Invasion isn't the name, invading is the game
you and your crew invented a new breed of non-lyrical species called "lames"
Brendon parents must feel proud of there only son
when a racist, stereotyping wigger rapper was born
Your a compulsive lier, if your job was to get "exclusives" you would be fired
your 15 mins of internet fame is up, 30 mins to N.O reached it's peak and your outta luck
Judging by your grammar, dropping out wasn't such a good ideal
imagine your the student and im the professor going in for the "quick" kill
Truth be told your nothing other then what you rep inside your area-code
Your mediocre at best, picture your a lamp giving light to precious gold that's centerfold
Your rhymes are watered down salt water lake lines
It's a shame i have to put you to rest for the second time.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Lol might as well post my verse.

YoungFire get the extinguisher because it's time to put you out
your skills are limited, you rap as if your infected with syphilis
You mumble your words, overall your MC vocabulary is absurd
your delivery is the type is to give swine flu to birds
Invasion isn't the name, invading is the game
you and your crew invented a new breed of non-lyrical species called "lames"
Brendon parents must feel proud of there only son
when a racist, stereotyping wigger rapper was born
Your a compulsive lier, if your job was to get "exclusives" you would be fired
your 15 mins of internet fame is up, 30 mins to N.O reached it's peak and your outta luck
Judging by your grammar, dropping out wasn't such a good ideal
imagine your the student and im the professor going in for the "quick" kill
Truth be told your nothing other then what you rep inside your area-code
Your mediocre at best, picture your a lamp giving light to precious gold that's centerfold
Your rhymes are watered down salt water lake lines
It's a shame i have to put you to rest for the second time.

you talk about his grammer but yet you can't even spell liar...wow... thats sad. you made yourself look stupid

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

you talk about his grammer but yet you can't even spell liar...wow... thats sad. you made yourself look stupid

Yeah, its fine lol. He cant spell it right unless hes still his lyrics off websites. And talking about lots of false shit, while my verse was all facts.

Like me being a drop out? But yet i graduated like 5 months before the rest of my class.
No exclusives? Havent i dropped 2 Wiz tracks? Havent i dropped snippets? Ask Haikes and Artille, showed them an exclusive on Tinychat the other night.
My grammar? You cant spell liar right LOL.
My skills limited? Yet i still get 100's of downloads and pages of feedback on anything i drop.
Put me to rest for a second time? LOL LOL LOL. The last time we battled you STOLE FUCKING lines.

What a joke

[JrockHQ]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

you talk about his grammer but yet you can't even spell liar...wow... thats sad. you made yourself look stupid

Lol that's the only flaw you can find in all of my verse? Must of done something right.
& from the amount of feedback people sent me via PM's i know who won.

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

LOL at the beef starting in this tournament. Nice!

Anyways, please don't make this a thing on blaming the judges Jrock.

Also, just a reminder WB Semi-Finals/LB Round 1 Verses are due tonight at 8PM EST

[JrockHQ]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

LOL at the beef starting in this tournament. Nice!

Anyways, please don't make this a thing on blaming the judges Jrock.

Also, just a reminder WB Semi-Finals/LB Round 1 Verses are due tonight at 8PM EST

What beef? i'm just laughing at the little flaws one or two people are trying to pick from my verse. lol
& im not blaming the judges? eryone has there own opinion. Good luck to everyone for the WB/LB first round.