Official Written Tournament #1 [Complete]

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [WB Finals/LB Round 2]

will be judged the same as the rest. It's essentially just 32 bars, but broken up into 2 verses. Maybe you can rap about different topics, be creative.

Judging will always be the same.

Okay just making sure the verses werent gunna be judged seperately. I see now, i see.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [WB Finals/LB Round 2]

Nice match YF.
Jrock, be ready,

[Young Corruption]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

can you upload the submitted in something other than shorttext.com cause that site is like never working now

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

can you upload the submitted in something other than shorttext.com cause that site is like never working now

I think what I'll start doing is just making a photoshop image with both of the verses of the people who are facing each other. Or something like that.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

I think what I'll start doing is just making a photoshop image with both of the verses of the people who are facing each other. Or something like that.

oh alright cool. thank you

[Cody]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Artille Vs. Young Fire- Both had pretty good verses but i thought that Artilles was overall better. With more stable punchlines and flow that seemed a little better. Artille gets the W.

Jrock Vs. Haikes- Haikes flow was great and his punchlines were good. Jrock had a decent flow and decent punchlines. Haikes gets the W.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Artille Vs. Young Fire- Both had pretty good verses but i thought that Artilles was overall better. With more stable punchlines and flow that seemed a little better. Artille gets the W.

Jrock Vs. Haikes- Haikes flow was great and his punchlines were good. Jrock had a decent flow and decent punchlines. Haikes gets the W.

Where is FTP and Beasly

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Where is FTP and Beasly

They didn't submit a verse. So whoever wins between you and Jrock will go to the LB Finals.

Just waiting on YNR (who will be doing it really soon) and Nefu.

[JMSN]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

^^^ didn't send my verse in on time :/ i was hooking up a system for one of my dudes and got on my computer 15 minutes late. smh @ myself.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

^^^ didn't send my verse in on time :/ i was hooking up a system for one of my dudes and got on my computer 15 minutes late. smh @ myself.

So basically whoever wins, me or Jrock, faces the looser of you and YF's battle..
Interesting. Lol
but Smh at FTP.. mannnn

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

JROCK VS HAIKES

Jrock
Flow: Great, but comes off sometimes.
Lyrics: I liked them very good.
Overall: 3.5/5

Vs

Haikes
Flow: I liked alot man, awesome flow here.
Lyrics: Where good i like alot of these punchlines.
Overall: 4/5

I thought haikes verse was better, had more game to me, allthough jrock did very good, i just think haikes got the best of him.

Winner - Haikes

YOUNG FIRE VS ARTILLE

Young Fire -
Flow: Sick flow, sick style, this made me wanna throw up haha.. in a good way.
Lyrics: Where awesome bro, i loved it. You went in and you told him what it is and what it do.
Overall: 4.7/5


Vs


Artille -
Flow: Was perfect, i can not lie you didn't go off a little bit here.
Lyrics: You named dropped the shit outta' me, but that doesn't matter its all good. It didn't effect anything by the way just saying this so people don't think im changing because of what he said.
Overall: 4.7/5

Now i sat here for like 25 minutes picking out the littlest flaws so i can pick a winner. And im going to say....






Winner - Young Fire

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Artille V. Young Fire:
Both Verses Were On Point I Just Thought That Artilel Was A Little Bit Better The Punchlines And The Flow From Both Was Good But I Gotta Hand This One To Artille.
Winner:Artille

Jrock V. Haikes:
Haikes Verse Was Crazy Nice Punchlines And Flow.Jrock Was Pretty Good Also Its Just That Haikes Came Harder,Therefore I Have To Give This One To Haikes.
Winner:Haikes