Official Written Tournament #1 [Complete]

[ATLien666]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

you talk about his grammer but yet you can't even spell liar...wow... thats sad. you made yourself look stupid

Lol, and you can't spell grammar; we ain't talkin' 'bout Kelsey.

I'm still shocked I lost, man, lol.

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

I have been informed that everyone, but ThaHoodNerd has submitted their verse. Expect results to come before 8PM EST, probably within the next hour or so.

[Cody]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Young Fire Vs. Haikes- Both disses were overall good with great punchlines from both participants but i felt as if Young Fire's diss was better.

Artille Vs. Beasley- Artille's diss was overall better than Beasley's. Punchlines were good and flow was good. Beasley had some good punchlines though.

Jrock Vs. Yung Cash- I never got a verse from Yung Cash. Jrocks was overall good.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Lol, and you can't spell grammar; we ain't talkin' 'bout Kelsey.

I'm still shocked I lost, man, lol.

i know i suck at spelling i'll admit it but i don't go around talking about other ppl's grammar then not have any myself. and whats with that "we ain't talkin' bout kelsey. where did that come from?

on topic: i think the judges did a good job judging.i agree with who won and who lost

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Young Fire V. Haikes:
I Enjoyed Both Of The Verses Great Flow And Punchlines From Both Of You Guys But I Feel Haikes Was Just A Little Bit Better.
Winner:Haikes

Artille V. Beasley:
Artille's Just Destroyed Beasley Hands Down Beasley Dont Get Me Wrong You Had A good Verse Its Just That Artilles Was Better IMO.
Winner:Artille

Jrock V. Yung Cash:
Jrock That Was A Good Verse Man I Never Recieved A Verse From Young Cash So Jrock Wins By Default.
Winner:Jrock

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

The deadline has passed. Just waiting for YNR to make the deciding vote on who wins between Young Fire and Haikes. Will update brackets and matches afterward.

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

YUNG N RUTHLESS JUDGING!!

Haikes Vs Young Fire.

Haikes -
Flow: Was very nice, i liked it a mighty lot.
Lyrics: Where great, they hit well, understood all of it.
Overall: 4.2/5

Vs


Young Fire -

Flow: Went off at one point, but stayed on for the most part.
Lyrics: Where awesome, Real shit, real power hits, real good punchlines good job.
Overall: 4.4/5

Winner - Young Fire
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Artille Vs BBeasley


BBeasley -

Flow: Was good, felt like it went off a bit.
Lyrics: Where alright, could of been better.
Overall: 3.5/4

Vs


Artille -

Flow: Was on point, i really felt as if you was talking to me.
Lyrics: Loved em, you went in and ate dude, no homo... Like this alot great work.
Overall: 4/5
Winner - Artille
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Next time, ill give more feedback then this, im just really busy today im sorry to everyone.

[ATLien666]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

i know i suck at spelling i'll admit it but i don't go around talking about other ppl's grammar then not have any myself. and whats with that "we ain't talkin' bout kelsey. where did that come from?

on topic: i think the judges did a good job judging.i agree with who won and who lost

Lol, grammar is the proper term. Grammer is Kelsey's last name, dude from Frasier and shit.

My bad, I forgot about the LB, I was gone.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Lol, grammar is the proper term. Grammer is Kelsey's last name, dude from Frasier and shit.

My bad, I forgot about the LB, I was gone.

lol oh alright i gotcha. at first i didn't know what you were talking about and i freaked a little cause my ex's name use to be kelsey so i thought maybe i knew you from somewhere

[ATLien666]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

lol oh alright i gotcha. at first i didn't know what you were talking about and i freaked a little cause my ex's name use to be kelsey so i thought maybe i knew you from somewhere

Ahh, ahaha, nah, no stalker ish.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [WB Finals/LB Round 2]

Verses: 2
Bars: 16 (No more, No less)

I need explanation on this, and how it will be judged. Thanks.

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [WB Finals/LB Round 2]

Verses: 2
Bars: 16 (No more, No less)

I need explanation on this, and how it will be judged. Thanks.

will be judged the same as the rest. It's essentially just 32 bars, but broken up into 2 verses. Maybe you can rap about different topics, be creative.

Judging will always be the same.