Official Written Tournament #1 [Complete]

[Jamerson]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

ima just give my opinion real quick.. i think next Written Tournament should have different topics, not only disses.. disses are just the easiest things to write about, you just insult the opponent lol. #just an idea

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Too hungover to finish my verse today. My bad haha.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Best of luck Artille.
Too bad YF lol.. If the judges could still judge and critique my verse before finals, appreciate it.

Young Fire get ready cuz you about to get eliminated
Heroshima swagger, you bout to get obliviated.
Try to take me down, I'm like a fucking avalanche
This dudes more homo than Michael Jackson on his ranch.
This dudes so fake, Its easy just to keep on bashing him
Ima expose his ass worse than kim kardshian
You stay at home on your computer all day.
I got a question, have you ever seen a real puss-ay?
You talk all this shit, throwing up the 8-5-0.
Learn a lesson, you can't last in chi-ca-go.
I be so sick, I leave your fucking stomach turning.
Girls think you got less game than pee wee herman.
16 bars, and I'm strait attacking ya.
This dudes drought for sex, is worse than africa.
Stop all the bullshit, saying that you got some exclusives.
Stop trying flow, you like a generic Young N Ruthless.
Owch that hurt, but I'm not close to being finished.
But if we're talking about your career, then yes, it's finished.
You're just a little rich kid, trying to act tough.
Your like a gas station, cuz you about to get pumped.
Tell your girl it's thanksgiving, cuz she bout to get stuffed.
Everything you ever fucking said was a bluff.
I cut this up, like freddy when he's pissed.
Young Fire you've officially been motha fucking dissed.

just decided to post my verse..

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

LOL DUDE NO WAY! We both mentioned Kim K in our verses lol. Too bad i didnt get to finish mine ha.

Round two between me and you, *ding ding*, you hear the bell ring?
So now its time to come with more fire than hell brings
He talk about reppin' bloods and totin' guns, but i bet he aint blast 'em
And this dude a coke head, dont believe me? Go ahead and ask him
He'll do anything to get his white, suck a dick or buy a scratch n win
He aint no Ray J, but i bet he doing lines off the car dash he in (Kardashian)


Theres more but im not gunna post it all. Good win Haikes.

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Unfortunately Haikes did not submit a verse while I only submitted 8 bars. I will get the win for submitting some type of material (same as WB Round 1 - ThaHoodNerd vs Beasley).

Official Written Tournament #1 Final Results:
1. Artille
2. Haikes
3. Young Fire
4-6. Jrock/Mr. FTP/Beasley
7-8. ThaHoodNerd/Yung Cash

The seeding will be figured out shortly. I would like to thank the judges (Cody, YungNRuthless, Nefu) for constantly giving feedback when it was needed. Thank you to everyone who participated and be on the look out for the Official Written Tournament #2 coming next month as well as the Official Audio Tournament #1 sign-ups starting TOMORROW!

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Unfortunately Haikes did not submit a verse while I only submitted 8 bars. I will get the win for submitting some type of material (same as WB Round 1 - ThaHoodNerd vs Beasley).

Official Written Tournament #1 Final Results:
1. Artille
2. Haikes
3. Young Fire
4-6. Jrock/Mr. FTP/Beasley
7-8. ThaHoodNerd/Yung Cash

The seeding will be figured out shortly. I would like to thank the judges (Cody, YungNRuthless, Nefu) for constantly giving feedback when it was needed. Thank you to everyone who participated and be on the look out for the Official Written Tournament #2 coming next month as well as the Official Audio Tournament #1 sign-ups starting TOMORROW!

Man I had 21 bars.. I just got on the computer.. I thought I had til 9 to submit it?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

So Artille, you just submitted 8 bars just to get the win cause you knew Haikes hadn't submitted anything yet? Unfair in my opinion. #JustSayin

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

So Artille, you just submitted 8 bars just to get the win cause you knew Haikes hadn't submitted anything yet? Unfair in my opinion. #JustSayin

I agree.. because on the first page it says July 3-5.. and it's always been 8 EST.
That's 9 where I'm at so it's still 7:49 where you're at.. and I had 21 bars written.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

I agree.. because on the first page it says July 3-5.. and it's always been 8 EST.
That's 9 where I'm at so it's still 7:49 where you're at.. and I had 21 bars written.

Actually 8 EST where you're at is 7 haha. But i still dont think the finals should be decided by shit like that.

[Cody]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

So Artille, you just submitted 8 bars just to get the win cause you knew Haikes hadn't submitted anything yet? Unfair in my opinion. #JustSayin

No. He submitted his bars to the judges then asked me if haikes submitted anything yet. #Getitstraight

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Yeah cause he would totally just submit and incomplete 8 bars?

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Actually 8 EST where you're at is 7 haha. But i still dont think the finals should be decided by shit like that.

Oh yah
Lol well it's okay.
Congrats to Artille