Official Written Tournament #1 [Complete]

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Has the beginning and due date been posted?

Check the second post.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Tomorrow at midnight they're due?

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

By 8PM (EST) tomorrow. And the judges should have them judged in time for when the next round starts. Everyone needs to read the PM I am sending.

Also, FTP you better be ready! I'm coming with fire...

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

I Dont Wanna Witdraw As A judge Really Dont But I Gonna Have To Skip This Round Art Gotta Hella Work To Do Only Verse's I Read Was Yours And YME's


EDIT:NVM Ill Have It Dont Before The 2nd Round Starts

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Can one of the judges let me know what exactly yall will be judging on? For example: Diss, lyrics, flow, multies, etc. Cause if yall aint judging on multies and shit, no reason to waste our time. Thanks.

[Artille]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Alright, the deadline has passed for WB Round 1 submissions. I should have the results from my judges shortly. If you have not submitted a verse you will automatically lose the round and get knocked to the Losers Bracket.

[Cody]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

ThaHoodNerd Vs. Beasly- Verse was never submitted by ThaHoodNerd. So Beasly wins by default.

Artille Vs. FTP- Artilles punchlines were really strong and got straight to the point, flow was great. FTP's Diss was well rounded but i feel as if it was lacking great punchlines flow was ok. Artille gets the W.

Haikes Vs. Yung Cash- Haikes diss went right to the point from bar 1 and his flow was great. Yung Cash's punchlines werent really good but his flow was decent. Haikes gets the W.

Young Fire Vs. Jrock- Young Fire's flow was perfectly on point and his punchlines were good. Jrocks flow was Great and His Punchlines were great. Jrock gets the W.

*edit* hope this was judged correctly

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

YungNRuthless JUDGING RIGHT HERE BITCHES!!


Haikes Vs Yung Cash

Haikes.
Flow: Very good, stayed on track,
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: They where pretty good punchlines, but i see places for improvement.
Overall Lyrics: 4/5
Overall/Rating: 4/5
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Yung Cash.
Flow: Started off nice, your structure of the lyrics was off, could of used some work.
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Couldn't really understand em' all. Your metaphors where more complex and i liked that.
Overall Lyrics: 3.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5
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Winner Haikes - Hes overall structure and flow was solid, Yung Cash, had complex punchlines in a good way. But Haikes was more consistent.


Artille Vs Mr. F.T.P

Artille.
Flow: Really good, it was all there.
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Did really good, I like the ones you were shooting.
Overall Lyrics: Really nice, i liked how you kept it real. 4.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5
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Mr FTP.
Flow: It got off at some points, but stayed on for the most part.
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Thought your punchlines was funny, great lines here.
Overall Lyrics: Great. 4/5
Overall/Rating: 4/5
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Winner Artille - He stayed on point. FTP Was funny, liked his punchlines. But um, Artille went with the real and i had to vote for that.


JRock Vs Young Fire

Jrock
Flow: Was really good, it was a great flow.
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Liked all the punchlines even if they was thrown at me. Good job.
Overall Lyrics: 4/5
Overall/Rating: 4.4/5
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Young Fire
Flow: Was on point i liked it alot.
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: I really like your shit here, because you was speaking truth.
Overall Lyrics: 4/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5
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Winner Young Fire - This one was the hardest for me. Jrock had a consistent flow, great punchlines, and good overall delivery, But Young Fire stomped him out with that real lyrics, and amazing punchlines.


TheHoodNerd didn't show up. So he lost.
BBeasley Wins FLAWLESS VICTORY.

Was really nice lyrics man, would of had a nice judging time.

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Haikes
Flow: Very Well Done I Could Keep On Track With
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines:You Had Some Pretty Good Punchlines But I Thougt You COuld Have Done Better With Them
Overall Lyrics: 3.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4/5

Yung Cash
Flow: Started off great but slowly fell apart towards the end
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: You Had Many I Actually Had To Look Up Some Of The Things You Talked About
Overall Lyrics: 3.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.0/5
Haikes- Overall His Verse Was Just better, Yung Cash Had Some Crazy Punchlines. But Haikes Takes It.

Artille
Flow: Really Good On Point Like Always
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Really Well Done Artille Had To Read Yours More Than Oncde Cuz I Kept Stoppin To Say "O Shit" LOL
Overall Lyrics: You Always Come With The A Game 4.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5

Mr FTP
Flow: At Some Parts You Were Off But Then Would Come Back On Track
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: You Are Hilarious,Good Stuff Man
Overall Lyrics: Good At Times 3.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4/5
Artille- Consistant. FTP I Like Your Punchlines Hilarious But Gotta Gove It To Artille.


Jrock
Flow: I Was Really Impressed Jrock Nice Flow Man
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: I Liked Them All Keep Up The Good Work
Overall Lyrics: 4.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5

YF
Flow: Was On Point As Always Man
Metaphors/Similes/Punchlines: Great Came With Some Hard Lines In This One
Overall Lyrics: 4.5/5
Overall/Rating: 4.5/5
YF- Hardest Battle To Judge Both Did Very Well But At The End I Had To Give It To YF.


ThaHoodNerd Vs. Beasly
Beasly- wins by default.

[JrockHQ]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

Can y'all post the verses like was done in the first tournament?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

LOL please post all my verse!!!!!

[JMSN]

Re: Official Written Tournament #1 [Starting June 23]

congrats to Artille and the rest of the winners!

now i know how the judging is being done i will be coming with some fire!